northern downpour sends its love

[justkeepshining]

title: northern downpour sends its love

pairing: jonghyun/kibum

rating: pg-13

genre: friendship, romance, sliceoflife!AU

word count: 7, 519

summary: A childhood friendship is a special thing; sometimes people grow out of them. And in Kibum's case, Jonghyun thinks, he has grown up well. Really, really  well.

(a/n: inspired by Kiss Me Slowly by Parachute,

Comments

[plainjanesbro]

Didn't read it yet but I read the ending to see if it ended happily.
;__: and it did so I'm gonna go read it now.

-spot is basically what I'm saying-

[justkeepshining]

Ah, I apologize if the "angst" genre was a bit off-putting! I took it off because it doesn't apply, really.

The spot is all yours! ^-^

[yui8_lin]

How I say this?

Basically -no lying in here- I've read like a thousand of fics and this is really one of the best oneshots.
Can't believe it's your first fic, really just can't.

The way you describe, the characterization, gosh the plot. Everything, like EVERYTHING is so well described and... I could go on and on but I have to study right now.

I just wanted to say that this was awesome, really beautiful and that I hope you keep writing because you do it really great.

And, probably, I'll edit this in vacations -2 more days- and quote all the pretty things of this shot. Also maybe put it a gif, I like gifs :3

Thank you so much for this :)

[justkeepshining]

Thank you so, so very much for this comment. You're like, one of the nicest people ever. :D

I really appreciate that you took the time to read this, considering it's a bit on the long side. OTL

And I promise I won't stop writing! I have a stock-pile of fics all over my laptop, it's just a matter of finishing and editing them.

Feel free to add any gifs you want. They're my favorite. :D

[cuethemusicc]

Wow, I'm not sure what to say. Your writing is really breathtaking. The progression is really great. Most oneshots feel a bit rushed but this actually had great character development and an interesting well paced plot.

Thank you for writing this, it was exactly what I needed. something fluffy, and lighthearted at times, but with an actual plot.

I love your writing style, it reads easy, not being wordy, while still being able to express emotion well. I don't think I can say much else except I loved it.

There was not a dull moment, and the smallest gestures and glances had my heart racing. It was really good.

I hope to see more from you in the future ^^

[justkeepshining]

Thank you so much! Oftentimes, I question my writing because of how lengthy it can get; I'm always worried that the pace is too slow. So thank you for liking that aspect of it. c:

You will be seeing more of me in the future, I promise!

[troublesome7890]

This is perfect omg ;-;
At the end I was left wanting more! Everything was done so nicely~
The characterization, plot, just everything. :D
I actually love longer oneshots so this was just so amazing.
Jonghyun and Key were so precious ugh flawfree
I can't wait for your next stories!

[justkeepshining]

Thank you very much! It really means a lot when people say that the characterization and plot were done well. I was so worried that I had left holes. OTL

Longer oneshots will probably be what I post, mostly, because I have a difficult time stopping an idea once I start it.

I appreciate the lovely comment! c:

[troublesome7890]

Drabbles can be so unsatisfying lol T~T

/random Who is that in your DP? It looks familiar..

And you're welcome! :D

[justkeepshining]

I agree! A lot of really good fics could come out of extended drabbles.

It's Tiffany Hwang! I meant to mention this in my last reply, but your DP. Oh man. It is just wonderful.

[shineeapple]

wow.. i got tear in my eyes when i read this. it's so beautiful i just cant... u,re so good. thank u so much for this lovely story. hope u can write more in future<333

[justkeepshining]

Aww, a tear? c,:

You're very welcome, and thank you for the wonderful comment. ^-^

I will be writing more, I promise!