How To Relate: Chapter 21

Mar 20, 2010 00:38


Chapter 21

Where To Go From Waking

Bright lights glared down and reflected off the shiny metal of the autopsy table, casting a harsh pallor on Tony's already unnaturally pale skin. If not for that, and the starkly purple rimmed 22 caliber hole in his chest, he could almost be mistaken as being among the living.

Standing over him, Ducky shook his head ( Read more... )

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moonshinefaerie March 20 2010, 06:56:50 UTC
Oh god you nearly killed me there for a second or two! That beginning was so not... fair, but... the ending had me giggle, because that is so totally Gibbs-esque. I can't wait for the next part! ...there is going to be a next part, right? ;~;

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justhowthisgoes March 20 2010, 07:26:54 UTC
*g* Sorry about that, but yours is exactly the kind of reaction I wanted from this chapter! :D

Yep, there'll definitely be more. I forgot to put the TBC at the end, but I've fixed that now.

btw, love the avatar! Smallville is my tied-for-favorite show with NCIS!

Thanks for reading!

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starbuckssue March 20 2010, 19:17:25 UTC
Me too, I was horrified until I got to Abby waking up, you cruel, cruel person!!! Great chapter though, poor Tony though having to have Gibbs mad at him while he's still vulnerable, hope he does give him some support and comfort for all he's ben through!

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justhowthisgoes March 20 2010, 20:19:27 UTC
Sorry! Glad you liked the chapter though!

You know Gibbs is only so angry because he was so worried. Next chapter they're gonna have a talk; hopefully it measures up to what you're expecting! :D

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you. are. amazing. moddeydhoo March 23 2010, 00:26:23 UTC
OMG, why aren't you writing for the actual show?! You are amazing. I am absolutely in love with this fic C: You've got each of the characters down to a T and the amount of detail you go into with the forensics and medical terminology/information is phenomenal.
I read the wholestory yesterday and can't wait for more!

Excellent job! I am LJ stalking you now :D Yesssssssss!

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Re: you. are. amazing. justhowthisgoes March 23 2010, 00:45:51 UTC
Amazing? *blushes* aww, me? XD

I actually want to go into TV writing, so thanks for the confidence booster. :D

Glad you like the story!

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Re: you. are. amazing. moddeydhoo March 23 2010, 02:24:10 UTC
Hey, any time! You've got a gift, m'dear! ;D

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space1traveler March 23 2010, 06:17:17 UTC
Told you so. (LOL)

Keep up the great work.

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justhowthisgoes March 23 2010, 06:41:12 UTC
LOL Thanks! XD

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byrons_brain March 26 2010, 11:00:05 UTC
YAY! looking forward to more......

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justhowthisgoes March 26 2010, 18:27:23 UTC
XD Thanks! Next chapter should be up in a day or two.

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