Comments | justbreathe80: New F/K/V fic: Like Breathing, for <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/aerye">aerye</a></strong>

justbreathe80

New F/K/V fic: Like Breathing, for aerye

Jun 09, 2006 12:01

aerye asked for F/K/V in her comments last night. Well, it grew a plot so, here it is.

Like Breathing
F/K/V, NC-17, 1588 words

Thank you to my darling brooklinegirl for the insta-beta. I adore you beyond the telling of it.

( Fraser and Kowalski don't fight too often, they generally maintain the peace, even though Ray knows that Kowalski's not easy, not by a long shot, and Fraser's not used to this, just being around someone else, let alone living with two Chicago cops who couldn't stay married to the same woman, for Christ’s sake. )

Comments 17

strangecobwebs June 9 2006, 16:22:54 UTC

Oh I love this! It's hot and good and I love the look at their relationship and Ray being so scared and Fraser being his usual crazy self and Ray trying to fix it all... *happy sigh* You're so good at this! :)

justbreathe80 June 11 2006, 04:59:31 UTC

Thank you SO much, darling! They got angsty on me. *g*

starfishchick June 9 2006, 16:30:22 UTC

So, this isn't just a "Ray, really, do you have to leave your towel on the bathroom floor, the towel bar is right there" kind of fight.

But oh, they'd totally have that fight too. Good job on this, relaly.

“I love you, you crazy bastard, we love you, don’t forget that. You scared the shit out of me today. I need you to be careful, please.”

*whimper*

justbreathe80 June 11 2006, 05:00:08 UTC

They would TOTALLY have that fight, yes!

Thank you so much! *beams*

akite June 9 2006, 17:20:10 UTC

i wish I had a fighting RayK/Fraser icon. It'd go perfect with this fic. I'm glad RayV was able to diffuse the situation, er, so to speak. *g*

justbreathe80 June 11 2006, 05:01:15 UTC

Yes, he definitely diffused! *g*

Thanks!

raveninthewind June 9 2006, 18:11:21 UTC

*wipes sweat off upper lip*

I love the wise RayV in this tory, who knows his guys inside and out.

they’re a family. Ray, Kowalski, Fraser, and the mutt.

*sighs in contentment*

justbreathe80 June 11 2006, 05:01:46 UTC

Ray Vecchio is so wise, in my opinion Glad you liked it! *g*

indywind June 9 2006, 18:13:13 UTC

aww...
Somehow wierd to see Vecchio as the peacemaker, but it works. and mmm, thressome porn.

justbreathe80 June 11 2006, 05:03:05 UTC

See, I totally see Vecchio as a a fighter, but as the most reasonable one, the least damaged. That's where ths came from, I think.

Thank you so much! I'm very glad you liked it!