by ethan norof

Jul 06, 2005 22:30

She cries about her Prada bag ( Read more... )

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divingforpaul July 7 2005, 21:46:47 UTC
it's not very good.
although this Ethan Norof person
had a good ideas,
there weren't put together
very creatively or
"poetically"

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_lovestobehated July 8 2005, 01:16:47 UTC
it wasnt my point to flow, it was my point to make a statement. but thanks. yeah, im ethan.

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sorry for my stereotyping.. divingforpaul July 8 2005, 19:22:29 UTC
well,nice try
i think your statement would have
went across better if it DID flow
i think people would understand/appreciate the
message better and you would be applauded for
writing a great poem IF it flowed.
and for someone with an SN like "jooxunit"
im glad to see you are thinking about more
important issues,than one's "Porn Star name"

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Re: sorry for my stereotyping.. _lovestobehated July 12 2005, 15:12:43 UTC
maybe you should write a poem and just stop bitching about the shit that I do.

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Re: sorry for my stereotyping.. divingforpaul July 13 2005, 03:06:01 UTC
why would i write a poem
when i am neither one who
claims to be a poet or desires
to be one,
and sure i'll stop "bitching"
and the "shit" that you do
when you stop allowing it to be
posted for the public to read,
which you should already know,
doesn't always end with a positive
response,if you really want to be a
"poet" you should be more open to
criticism,whether it be good,bad or
constructive.

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