REWRITE!

[just_ruth]

It Lives - It Liiiiiiives!

Comments

[lil_1337]

This is flowing much better with the scenes in this order. It follows a more linear path. I'm glad it lives and can't wait to see what comes next.

[just_ruth]

Yes, I let it sit for Saturday and Sunday, then put on my editing hat (what has been called my "hostile and unfriendly to new writers hat")
and looked at it like I would a fan fic.

"If you wanted the story to be about A and B, why did you start with C?"

[lil_1337]

It worked. Fiction is fiction regardless of who you are writing it about.