The Rider by Ruth (oct31challenge)

Oct 31, 2006 06:43

The Rider
by Ruth
(word count: 2040)

_Whenever the moon and the stars are set
Whenever the wind is high
All night long in the dark and the wet
A man goes riding by
Late in the night when the fires are out
Why does he gallop and gallop about?_

- “Windy Nights” _ A Child’s Garden of Verses_
Robert Louis Stevenson

drumming hoofbeats outside on the road )

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thom413 October 31 2006, 13:05:32 UTC
I loved this - very Gothic and Austenesque. A great Halloween treat!

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just_ruth November 1 2006, 00:35:24 UTC
Thank you! Jane Austin and I have had a love/hate relationship since eighth grade English. Her books are boring, but she films very well.

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alena_yuy October 31 2006, 17:32:03 UTC
Like I said before, very nice. I love it.

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just_ruth November 1 2006, 00:36:04 UTC
Thank you! And thank you for beta'ing it.

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alena_yuy November 1 2006, 21:15:14 UTC
No problem. It's fun reading stuff in its raw form.

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windsorblue October 31 2006, 17:54:18 UTC
This is marvelous - I like the atmosphere and feel of it.

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just_ruth November 1 2006, 00:36:37 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

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baikautsugi November 1 2006, 04:17:47 UTC
What an interesting read! Thanks for posting it.

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just_ruth November 1 2006, 13:38:42 UTC
You're welcome! I'm glad you liked it.

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