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just_jasper

Fic: Betterment

Jan 28, 2012 03:15

Title: Betterment
Author: wanderingjasper
Rating: NC17/FRAO
Characters: Morgan/Reid
Word Count: 1981
Themes: Sex, trans!Reid.
Warnings: Hard smut.
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters, but I do take liberties with them for no financial gain.
Notes: Sequel to Wonderment.
Summary: Reid shares more information about his trans status, and the sex only gets ( Read more... )

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just_jasper January 28 2012, 22:18:13 UTC

Thanks bb :D

omnipresentdmat January 28 2012, 15:24:35 UTC

You really are the best, I don't even know how to tell you properly how much I love this fic. Just imagine me sighing lovingly at it.

just_jasper January 28 2012, 22:18:52 UTC

Ahaha, I shall imagine it~

avferreira January 28 2012, 17:07:34 UTC

That was interesting and very sweet. A lot of food for thought too.

just_jasper January 28 2012, 22:19:11 UTC

Thanks :)

hanyou_sensei January 28 2012, 18:44:36 UTC

This is a beautiful progression from the last story. It was beautifully done and logical. i'd love to see penetrative sex, but i appreciate the build up to it. The slowness makes the story so much more tangible than if they just had penetrative sex. Morgan is doing what he needs to ensure Reid's comfort before he takes that final, all too important step.

The slow progression gives them more to lean on. And i adore Morgan remembering how Reid referenced his genetalia. And respecting Reid's feelings in regards. It's complicated and terrifying and beautifully rendered here.

Also, i like that Morgan hasn't been shown getting off on Reid yet. It gives credibility to his assertion that it's all about Reid and how he feels, rather than what he looks like. Morgan respects and adores Reid, regardless of any physical attributes.

Like Wonderment, this is a beautiful story of more than just sex. It's a beautiful story of love and devotion. This is a great start to a new series, and i'd really love to see more.

just_jasper January 28 2012, 22:21:22 UTC

Thank you for the comments on both pieces.

I'm glad you picked up on Morgan not seeking his own release, because that was a conscious decision, hopefully one I will be exploring in the next fic in this 'verse.

dopeyangel101 January 28 2012, 23:16:37 UTC

This right here restores my faith in the human race.

Can't really explain why, I just know it does.

Well done x

just_jasper February 1 2012, 17:18:24 UTC

Thank you :)