Fanfic: Empty [Criminal Minds]

Aug 16, 2011 03:55


Title: Empty
Author: wanderingjasper
Rating: PG13
Characters: Morgan/Reid
Word Count: 755
Themes: Angst.
Warning: Miscarriage, mpreg.
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters, but I do take liberties with them for no financial gain.
Notes: One-shot. Fill for the wild card/free space prompt at angst_bingo, interpreted as "miscarriage".
Summary: Reid considers the loss.

There is an ache in my heart for the imagined beauty of a life I haven't had, from which I had been locked out, and it never goes away. )

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just_jasper August 16 2011, 11:12:12 UTC
Awww *huggles*

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itslynnduh August 16 2011, 03:30:23 UTC
.____. this was heartbreaking and beautiful and just.. gah. you're amazing.

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just_jasper August 16 2011, 11:11:32 UTC
Thank you bb <3

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maldeluxx August 17 2011, 10:08:25 UTC
*tissues* :*(

So good, so hurty *sniff*

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just_jasper August 17 2011, 11:16:37 UTC
Thank you ~

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magical_mia August 19 2011, 21:53:43 UTC
Recently I've been unable to go on the internet as much as I'd like and I always get a little thrill of excitement before checking your page - but I never dreamed you'd have written this much! I'm going to try to ration them out over the weekend (although I doubt I'll actually be able to be so disciplined!)

Oh but this was so heartbreaking :( You perfectly captured the moment after a traumatic event when you're no longer caught up with practicalities and the agony hits. The idea of Morgan waking up in the middle of the night to find Reid bleeding is really upsetting- I've never actually thought about how frightening the physical experience of a miscarriage must be before.

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just_jasper August 19 2011, 23:58:07 UTC
Oooh, I hope you enjoy them! I had two days left for angst bingo and a surprisingly cooperative muse, so I was firing out the fic. Some of them aren't my best work I don't feel, but it was an enjoyable challenge and I covered some stuff that have made me think about future fics.

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basez_dreams August 20 2011, 22:44:54 UTC
This just about broke my heart. Poor Reid (and Morgan).

Great job! :)

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just_jasper August 20 2011, 23:50:13 UTC
Thank you :)

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