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Fic: Whiskey Mouth [Criminal Minds]

Jul 27, 2011 04:01

Title: Whiskey Mouth
Author: wanderingjasper
Rating: NC17/FRAO
Characters: Reid/Ethan, Morgan/Reid, Hotch
Word Count: 2993
Themes: Angst.
Warnings: Minor references to drug use.
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters, but I do take liberties with them for no financial gain.
Notes: One-shot. Fill for the prompt "betrayal" at angst_bingo
Summary: In New Orleans on a case, ( Read more... )

Comments 20

elly_rad23 July 27 2011, 03:21:50 UTC

omg jasper i am beyond words- this was amazing. i want to cry.

just_jasper July 27 2011, 13:21:07 UTC

Awww! Sorry hun.

evilyn_1007 July 27 2011, 05:28:49 UTC

I should probably have saved this for another day as I am a little over emotional today. I can't stop carying now. This hurt to read. I'm not an angst girl but I have to say this is great. I want to hug morgan. And I love how I still felt for your spencer even though I kind of wanted to smack him, but I figure his in enough pain. I think I need some fluff now *wipes eyes*

just_jasper July 29 2011, 00:42:16 UTC

Aww bless <3

mildly_neurotic July 27 2011, 17:06:19 UTC

*wibble* I really have to learn to trust my instincts when a summary makes me shy away. Of course your execution is flawless as expected but I shouldn't have let myself get lured in by how good a writer I know you are. Too sad for my feint heart. Going away to cry now.

just_jasper July 29 2011, 00:41:40 UTC

Aww I'm sorry you're sad :(

mildly_neurotic July 29 2011, 00:43:37 UTC

Take it as a testament to your story's ability to evoke emotion. :-)

Forgive me if I skip the other angsty ones though. I'm a wimp! LOL

cyberhavok July 28 2011, 03:49:03 UTC

I'm not a great fan of angsty!Morgan/Reid stories but being a fan of your stories, I thought I'd read this anyway. This is wonderfully written. Spencer is a total mess, which someone struggling with addiction probably would be. I dare say I'd like to know even more about what made Spencer turn to Ethan in a sequel of some kind, but I'm sure I can use my imagination to come up with a proper reasoning.

Anyway, great story! I enjoyed it, despite the lack of cheeriness. :P

just_jasper July 29 2011, 00:41:13 UTC

Thank you hun :)

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just_jasper July 31 2011, 00:52:00 UTC

Thank you very much. I hope you find more fic you like in the fandom :)