Wait

[just_being_me08]

Title: Wait

Rating: 15

Fandom: Assassin’s Creed

Pairing: Shaun/Desmond

Summary: Shaun doesn’t need anyone. But if he ever did need anyone at all, then it would be Desmond.

Disclaimer: Everything belongs to Ubisoft and not me. Please don’t sue, my student loan won’t cover it. Lyrics belong to Earshot.

Author’s Notes: So I’m venturing out

Comments

Re: Feedback

[just_being_me08]

Wow...first off can I just say thank you so much for the time you put into this comment! I assure you the time its taken me to reply doesn't reflect what it means to me. I really do appreciate the constructive criticism. :)

First off, I really am glad that you liked the idea of the story and the characterisations; as my first attempt at the fandom that was the bit that I was most determined to get right, but also the bit I was most worried about getting wrong. And I am glad that you liked the dialogue, since Shaun is such a strong character in terms of speech, and I really didn't want to lose that.

And thank you for the pointers on my grammar etc too. I'm quite experimental in how I write, and sometimes it works, and sometimes I produce sentences that make me cringe slightly when I reread them a few weeks later. And I definitely appreciate your thoughts! I'm trying to improve all the time, and as my day job is a scientist I am afraid my knowledge and experience with grammar does let me down every so often. So thank you, I will definitely bear what you've told me in mind. :)

Again, thanks so much. I feel very welcomed, and I'm glad you enjoyed my writing. :)

Re: Feedback

[yumearashi]

You are very welcome! Thank you for taking the concrit well - even when there's a specific request for it, I'm always a little worried that the recipient will get defensive ^.^;

I wouldn't feel bad about the experimental grammar ^o^ Grammar and spelling are things that anyone can improve. What makes a good writer is a real understanding of the characters and a desire to improve, and they can't be learned; a writer either has them or doesn't. You have both in spades, so I tip my hat to you ^o^ I hope to see more of your work in the future ^__^