Title: Tales of A Time Agency - 2/?
Rating: 15 to NC-17 to be safe.
Characters: Jack, Ianto, John Hart, Toshiko, Owen, Gwen, Martha, The Doctor
Pairings: Predominantly Jack/Ianto (eventually), but it’s the Time Agency so expect Jack/John, Tosh/Owen, John/the consenting population of the universe……
Chapter: Chapter Number Two.
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Yep I had a great week-end with my friends (but too much candies and alcohol and food, I'm not twenty anymore... lol) I hope you have a great one too ! You did a great job about how Ianto lost control. In this chapter, I think what you have done the most brilliantly is the way you describe the characters thoughts (heuuu, look weird if you considerate that its what I found its was a little bit too fluffy... But you did well). You know how much I love bad Jack, specially when John is around, so please write more !!! Ho, and more bang bang please ? lol
I wrote a little bit last evening and I thought of you, I'm so impatiente to send you my new story (its take time, because I always erase sentence, I need to be satisfied before send you my story... But, do you want to read an other style ? More funny ? Tell me I will send you one ...)
Ok, ouf, have to return at my correction ;)
Prends soin de toi ma belle écrivaine en herbe
Nadine
xxxx
(Thank for the hugs I send you a lots of bonbons !!!)
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Merci beaucoup ma chere, I'm glad that you liked that, as when you say that you like something, I know you really do. :) I'm sorry that you found the thinking too fluffy, but then again I'm so pleased you thought that I had done it brilliantly, thank you! :) I love bad Jack too, as you know.....and John so yes.....there's going to be more of them coming soon!
Awww you did? Haha I write like that though.....I am ALWAYS deleting things. Another style? Sure... I would love to read whatever you want to send me. :D
Ahhhhh not those corrections though.... :( *hugs*
(une ecrivaine herbe? Awwwwwwww merci beaucoup Nadine!! That made me smile so much. :) )
Prends soin de toi!
Sian
(Yay!!! I love them, :P)
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