Second Impressions (1/2)

Feb 01, 2015 01:49

Pairing: JongKey
Rating: NC-17
Genre: College!AU, Band!AU, a bit of humour, a bit of angst, a bit of sex and a bit of romance
Word count: 15690 total (7771 this part)
Summary:( When Jonghyun has an accidental one-night stand with a longtime crush, he isn’t sure what comes next or what to believe. )

rating: nc-17, genre: angst, type: chaptered, pairing: jongkey, genre: smut, genre: humour, !fanfic

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astridminjichoi February 16 2015, 13:11:25 UTC
i'm back for my signature late comments otl
but i was lying in my bed when i read this, and not kidding you i was like blushing and grinning like an idiot. I LOVE THIS JONGHYUN. it is literally perfect ;; i love you so much otl
this comment will most likely not be that coherent lmao but i just want u to know how i feel. it will be mainly gushing over jonghyun lol

and just the entire image of jjong crushing on kibum from a distance is so freaking adorable
which Jonghyun vowed not to touch, not only because of its questionable origin but also since he had decided that drinking in public was a bit too risky for him. good jonghyun lol
he’d probably seen the show, seen Jonghyun on stage belting out rock songs and power ballads, acting cocky and pleasing the crowd with gratuitous lip-biting; who could blame Jonghyun for not wanting to ruin the illusion with awkward attempts at small talk? i feel like this sums up his personality so flawlessly imma cry. he is such a dork and i love it ;;
Jonghyun nodded adamantly, still too tongue-tied to utter any intelligible words. i can't stop smiling. i felt so bad for him otl
talking to Jonghyun and possibly-most-likely flirting with him. ''possibly-most-likely'' i snorted omfg. your choice of words is just dkfjsldk
“Do you want to…” Kibum began idk about you jonghyun but i want to
Jonghyun nearly swallowed his tongue at the question-he’d like anything, thank you very much i couldn't stop smiling at this. jjong was just the perfect amount of awkward i want to squish him
i /could/ be quoting the entire blowjob, bc i was drooling. like wow. your oral sex is always on point
slowing his pace as he brushed his lips to the soft trail of hair below Kibum’s navel, mouthing at the skin until he felt Kibum’s clothed erection bump his chin. so freaking hot hot hot hot
Kibum was still kissing him when he slipped a thigh between Jonghyun’s, aligning them so that they could rub off against each other’s hips. i was whimpering at this point bc any form of frottage/dry humping is just plain UNF <3

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astridminjichoi February 16 2015, 13:12:04 UTC
He didn’t know what the proper etiquette was for this particular brand of morning-after, but his mother had raised him right and he figured slipping out of bed without saying anything would be rude, no matter the circumstance. BUT JFC HOW DO YOU MAKE HIM SO CUTE AFTER SOMETHING SO DIRTY. ;;;
He felt even better with his decision when Kibum mumbled something in his sleep and slipped an arm around Jonghyun’s waist, leaning into him. i was rolling around in my bed at this point bc i was excited
He was about to ask if they had time for a quick shower when Kibum suddenly rolled over him to plant a long, wet kiss to his mouth. almost screaming bc YESS this is good >_> but poor jjong will be so confused omg
But why would Kibum have kissed him again this morning if he’d been expecting to kick Jonghyun out? Was he just being polite? Jonghyun gave a long sigh, feeling out of his depth. i feel bad for jonghyun, bc i would be just as confused. poor guy, social situations are complex otl
especially when he preferred writing and composing alone in his room to performing-something he’d never quite admitted to anyone because he wasn’t that stupid. jonghyun is so adorable help
“No no that’s…” Jonghyun began, struggling for words. The reality of the situation was making him anxious. “Cool,” IDK IF I WANNA HUG YOU OR PUNCH YOU
He sort of just wanted to crawl into his bed, maybe cry a bit into Roo’s soft fur, and rock himself into a restless sleep. currently gushing over pitiful!jjong
“I may have had trouble undoing his jeans, too,” he added in a small voice, refusing to look at Minho as he uttered it. “I was nervous.” NOT SHITTING YOU I WAS ''AWWWWWW'-ING OUT LOUD AT THIS PART. i wanna scoop jonghyun up in my arms and hold him forever omg
Jonghyun went through the weekend with what he considered to be minimal moping loling at the choice of words again
“Are you taking this class because you’re gay or because you’re secretly a mama’s boy?” i was like laughing to myseld and being like ''both'' and then
gaping for a moment and almost stuttered out a “both?” lmao where is the lie
You’re cute when you’re shy. I’ll be waiting for your text. I AGREE KIBUM. ISN'T HE CUTE
“You mean come again?” Kibum said, emphasizing the last words and leaving Jonghyun spluttering at the pun. i like kibum so much in this bc he so would
Not that-I mean-not that I’m implying you’re a fan, I just meant…” Jonghyun fumbled for words it think this is the most adorable characterization of jonghyun like, ever
Although Jonghyun would be more than fine with a little making out. Or a lot, he wasn’t picky. agreeing with jonghyun
“Why did you call yourselves Basic Ace?” I SNORTED SO HARD AT THIS. I SEE YOU.
Maybe it was best to leave the philosophical discussions of Jonghyun’s inner mind to another date. Or to never bring it up, possibly. screaming bc jonghyun's inner monologue is being adorable again
but he had been in a hurry to move when he’d found out his previous roommate was actually a bigoted, homophobic asshole. *applauds kibum for getting the fuck outta there*
to linger at his building’s entrance for a soft-spoken goodbye and an even softer kiss. *blushes*
i loved this so much ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; like let me hug you forever
*patiently waiting for part 2* <3

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just2wings February 16 2015, 23:43:37 UTC
The whole point of this fic is kinda how Jjong differs on stage vs off of it so I'm really glad you quoted that sentence about not wanting to ruin the illusion <3 it's a very important one (at least I find) so thank youuuuu <3 made me happy
Jjong was nervous! Lol. But seriously now when I re-think about it I don't find he came off all that awkward xD props to you jjong
"your oral sex is always on point" excuse me while i laugh forever at this xD it's really funny out of context lmao. but thank you so much! i'm so glad you think so! I kinda really like writing them soooo.... yeah ahem lol
Well the real Jonghyun can be drop dead sexy and a cute puppy the next second so you could say I got inspiration from him xD
You're so cute, reading in bed ^^ lemme squish you~~
"IDK IF I WANNA HUG YOU OR PUNCH YOU" teehee made me laugh xD
Where is the lie indeed hehe couldn't help but include that little joke. He's such a mama's boy <3
YES THANK YOU I actually considered calling the band "Orgel" because it sounds cool and it's a song Jjong wrote but in the end I kinda wanted this fic to be a tribute to Base and all so I combined the solos. Cheesy but oh well.
*hugs you tight tight tight*
Seriously though I got so happy and excited when I saw this in my inbox, I can't thank you enough <3 I'm so glad you liked this and just thanks so much for the lovely wonderful comment <3333

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