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THIS AU WILL BE THE DEATH OF ME astridminjichoi October 12 2014, 16:38:58 UTC
late comment as always otl
i think i've told you this before, but this is my favourite au, ever. their relationship is so realistic and genuine ;A; i cry. anyways
i love how casual they are. you make everything seem so effortless >_> even reading kibum complain about his group project is exciting
“Do you think if I hang around I’ll get lucky afterwards?” ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
“I hear the new bassist is easy,” ;);););)
breath fanning across Jonghyun’s lips, who promptly wondered why they weren't kissing still so he leaned in to fix that at once. jonghyun and i apparently think alike uwu
Jonghyun smirked to himself, looking down and taking in the washed-out denim of his shredded pants and the loose, low fit of his sleeveless shirt; he was so getting laid tonight. Spectacularly laid, even though Kibum was pretty much a sure thing anyway (he was even wearing eyeliner-Kibum didn’t stand a chance). HOT AF. and eyeliner too???? damn jonghyun knows his shit, kibum is one lucky guy
It was hard to see into the dark crowd from under the blinding stage lights, so Jonghyun soon gave up the search for Kibum and could only hope he’d made it to the venue. tbh i love this because i've read so many fics where they're all like ' i saw his eyes in the crowd and our gazes locked or sth' like bro have you ever performed on stage??? i do frequently lol and you can't see a thing OTL
A memorable guitar solo also had the lead guitarist back-to-back with Jonghyun, earning cheers and whistles from the crowd. dude that gig was wild from start to finish omg i wanna watch
and his first thought was that this grinding wasn’t good for the strings. omg i thought the same thing, those are expensive >_> but kibum is really distracting hehehe
“Hey Kibum,” he greeted casually; he’d seen enough of this in high school not to be fazed by it their pda is no joke >_>
“Hurry up, meet me in the bathroom,” ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Kibum then licked a long stripe along the underside, stopping to suck at his sac with reddened lips, looking gorgeous as ever and outright smirking when he felt Jonghyun tremble under his hands. i swear this was one of the best and most intense blowjobs i have ever read omg
“And you’re not allowed to wipe off your eyeliner until I say so,” he mumbled between kisses. AGREED
tbh i wish i wasn't such an idiot about commenting bc i really do appreciate this fic a whole ton. there is something about your writing >_> sometimes i just reread this entire series (if you can call it that) otl, i love it <3
thanks for updating babe^^ you're the best

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Re: THIS AU WILL BE THE DEATH OF ME just2wings October 13 2014, 03:39:12 UTC
;_; thank you for the comment I don't care if it's late \o/
Hurhurhur I'm so touched and pleased that you like this AU because it was all I could seem to write lol. And I'm so glad you think their relationship is realistic because sometimes I think it's all so fluffy but then again they're in love you know??? Let them have their fluff lmao
I couldn't resist the little groupie jokes
I always have such a big, dumb smile on my face when I read your comments. Really, thank you so much -- for reading and taking the time to comment and for making me smile <333
let's face it Jonghyun is also a lucky guy hehehe
And yes thank you! You can't see anything when you're on stage usually. Sometimes the few first rows depending on the lighting but or else it's a sea of darkness xD
I hesitated describing and writing out the gig but I'm glad I did in the end! Idk, it felt right.
Your emoticons oh god xDDDD had me smiling too
You are so not an idiot in your comments are you kidding I love them ;___; thank you so much, I'm so glad you liked this *bear hug* I'm glad I could update for Key's bday <3

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