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iridae December 30 2013, 23:12:05 UTC
“Jesus, Kibum, how much did you pack? It’s only two days!”

“And two nights. Lift with your knees,”
fucking chortling

this was perfect as always, thanks so much for sharing it with us and I hope you have a really great new year as well! \o/

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just2wings December 31 2013, 19:04:51 UTC
Hehehe thank you I'm glad you thought it was funny xD

It's my pleasure to write and of course I share! Thanks again, I hope the new year treats you well <3

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yuya_lovah December 31 2013, 00:07:25 UTC
Poor Jonghyun, constantly falling out of bed XD he really needs to stop :P
“Freak, you remember my underwear?” He also kept it, Kibum... your boyfriend is really something :P

Absolutely adorable and funny, as always <3

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just2wings December 31 2013, 19:06:30 UTC
He really does need to stop lest further injuries occur xD
Actually, those weren't Kibum's underwear, they were just some of Jonghyun's old ones xD but still yes he's something lol
Thank you so much darling <3

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yuya_lovah January 1 2014, 12:47:09 UTC
I wasn't so sure about the underwear thing but my brain elaborated everything on its own D: (and I even thought I didn't write it XD)

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just2wings January 2 2014, 19:19:33 UTC
hehe that happens to me too sometimes xD

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kellyzat December 31 2013, 00:59:46 UTC
'Lift with your knees' - EPIC. I love love love this series. Have a fantastic New Year and thank you for sharing your work.

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just2wings December 31 2013, 19:07:08 UTC
Hehe thank you I'm glad you liked this and the series! Happy new year to you as well and it is my pleasure as always to share <3

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hautekeyture December 31 2013, 06:26:23 UTC
UGH.
this was so cute and fluffy and adorable. i was seriously laughing the whole way through.

“Jesus, Kibum, how much did you pack? It’s only two days!”

“And two nights. Lift with your knees," - rotflol-ing

she had replied that it was because he made her son happy. Jonghyun had cried (and his mother had hugged him). - i can picture his pitiful crying too

Remember when you were a shy, blushing virgin?”... “Yeah, neither do I.” - HAHA

Jonghyun knew the memory of it made him reserved; their first time had meant so much to the both of them. - this was really sweet

(omg i'm quoting this whole thing sorrynotsorry)

“I thought we’d both agreed that girls didn’t count,” Jonghyun teased back, their inside joke. “And it was one girl. Well, one and half.” - HAHA x2

i just really adored the dialogue here it was quick and funny and sweet and everything good.

took both his hands and twisted the white fabric around his wrists, - YES. that whole jjong-sneakily-undressing-kibum and makeout scene was hot. HOT. well, before they were ( ... )

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just2wings December 31 2013, 19:13:44 UTC
Thank you, it's always so reassuring to know others think it's funny because humour can be very tricky! Thank you <3

There's no need to imagine Jonghyun's pitiful crying because we've all seen it irl lolololol

And I noticed a typo in something you quoted and I fixed it so THANK YOU for that too

I like this verse because it's an excuse to let the characters be dumb xD

I'm glad you thought it was hot, I had such nice imagery floating around in my head but I still don't feel like I did it justice but whatever, I'm glad it worked for you \o/

Thank you darling, and thank you to you too for all your fics <3 And I sent you a message about the shinee world tour because I seriously want to get in on it even if I have to travel PLEASE LET IT WORK I WOULD DO ANYTHING
ahem. Happy new year, best wishes and I hope 2014 treats you well dearest <3

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just2wings January 2 2014, 19:19:04 UTC
hehehehe but they ended up both carrying it.
I'm glad you liked that part because honestly I was worried it might have been too much lol
Thank you so much, and thank you for liking this verse <3 Happy new year to you as well, I hope 2014 treats you well ^^

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