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cuethemusicc April 27 2013, 10:02:41 UTC
Okay, so I just finished the series so far ;~; I tried to savor it and save this last chapter for later but it's obvious how that turned out. hah.

And omg I wasn't aware that the tooth-rotting bit was a disclaimer DX S'okay, the cavities hurt so good because they're wrapped in fluff and sunshine and jongkey loving and and and....

lol well, so yeah, this is a compilation of my feelings towards the fic as a whole. First off, I just love the easiness of it. It was sweet in all the right places, but under that, what it all came down to was how real it felt. Like the fact that I could completely imagine this possibly happening... like if jongkey was actually real, this is how I would want it to happen(your fic really didn't help my delusional shipper feels). The way they talk to each other, the dynamics of their relationship, all down to how they decide who tops (xD) all felt so real, I could almost touch it. It also reminded me how much I just want them to be happy ^^ And the whole adoption concept warmed me up all over. However and with whomever they get children, they will both be wonderful fathers. That's for sure~ They're both really great with kids, and it was so cute and adorable to imagine them in these scenarios (ie their daughter's first period haha that one was amazing ;p). and I'm a sucker for cuddling and jongkey being so close and natural so I loved this.

At this point, I'm not even sure if this needs to be said but you really have a way with words, and the flow and style of your writing is distinct in that it reads so easily. The way you put your words together is never overwhelming, and you do so without making it sound like it's a children's story ;p so A+ 5/5 stars for you xD
idk how you do it, but sometimes you make me forget I'm reading, I'd become so immersed.

And also, fluffy smut is my favorite smuttttttt <3 smut without any emotions just doesn't do it for me. but your fic was rich with it in every touch, every gesture, and every conversation. I was in love with them being in love with each other xD

I'm so glad you're so dedicated to jongkey ;~; (if I remember correctly, it's pretty much the only pairing you write, right?) it just makes me happy because the comm has been so quiet lately. it seems like the amount of people who write it/ship it/read it is a lot smaller lately. Anyways, it just makes me happy that you write jongkey and I hope you continue to in the future OTL

So this comment is long enough to make me look crazy yet somehow not long enough to portray how much I liked this fic so yeah. I'll leave it how it is OTL OTL Thank you so much for writing!

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just2wings April 28 2013, 01:28:54 UTC
I wonder what it's like to actually read them in chronological order and not in the order they were written xD I hope it was okay!
I'm glad you thought it felt easy! This really pleases me because that's what I wanted; just to show snapshots of this little family who love each other. When I think about this verse I always end up thinking about just how much they love each other and their kids xD I'm so cheesy. But yeah. This verse is built on cheesy love I guess \o/
And ficdom runs on delusional shipper feels, so that's okay haha <3
Yes! They will both be great daddies :)
The first period one was so much fun to write! It was fun cackling to myself all the while ^^.
Thank you so much for the compliments ;_; You are so nice. Let me hug you *squishes*
Fluffy smut \o/ I like emotion, too.
And yeah, I only write JongKey. Writing fic from scratch is kind of...hard(?) for lack of a better word. Most times I write very slowly, so it takes a lot of time and effort. It's not something I'm willing to do if not for something I feel strongly about. Add that to the fact that I don't like breaking up ze OTP and you get only JongKey xD
I feel like lj as a whole has really slowed down, the comm especially :(
I hope you keep writing too :)
I'm so glad you liked these, thank you very much <3 I really appreciate <333

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