14 Days of A/G:Fic:Why Don't You Do Right?

[jungle_ride]

Title: Why Don't You Do Right?
Characters/Pairings: Arthur/Guinevere, Merlin, Morgana
Rating/Warnings: PG-13
Spoilers: No
Disclaimer: I own nothing =[
Summary: Arthur’s and Gwen’s official first date and everything’s going wrong.
Word Count: 3,192
Author’s notes: for Camelot_love’s 14 days of love. Prompt was U-28 Arthur/Gwen trapped in an elevator. Merlin

Comments

[s11235]

Lol, this was great, poor Arthur! Poor Gwen! Drunk Morgana was hilarious, loved how you worked in bits from the show, Morgause stuff and Merlin trying to poison Morgana. I liked the interaction between Gwen and Arthur, they seemed very comfortable with each other, which is something I love about the pairing so much. They have their awkward moments, but they slip into comfortable very easily. Love how patient Gwen is. Very sweet, lovely, and funny fic :D x

[jungle_ride]

Thank you so much. Super happy the show bits fit in ok and didn’t seem out of place and that drunk Morgana was ok, I was un-sure if her speech was to hard to read. I also love how they go from awkward back into comfortableness so well, such a sweet quirk of theirs. Thanks for commenting x

[mag2425]

This was so funny. :) I laughed the whole was through.

First the swingers club(very cleaver idea btw) and then getting stuck in the elevator. This is definetly a date that they will remember.
Loved the way you added the bits from the show in.

This was an awesomly cracky fic. :D

[jungle_ride]

O YAY!! Glad you found it funny, was afraid it was only funny to me…it’s hard writing stuff you want to be funny because your not sure how people will respond, if they’ll get it etc.

The swingers club came about when I was listing to “why don’t you do right” with Benny Goodman and Peggy Lee, hence the title of the fic, and other Benny Goodman stuff and it just rnadonly popped into my head and at first I was like…o god is this too weird but glad I went with it xD thanks for commenting =D

[til_tomorrow]

LOL I love reading crack like this =) It would totally be like Arthur to take her to a swingers club without knowing it and of course being stuck in an elevator would happen too. OT4 is always good to read.

[jungle_ride]

=D thanks, happy you enjoyed it

[purely_distel]

I just have to say - I find your icon oddly disturbing ^^

[til_tomorrow]

hehe I tbh honest I did too that's why I had to save it

[cifan70]

I love this. Drunk Morgana was absolutely hilarious. Great job on it.

[jungle_ride]

^^ Thanks alot

[mattyroh07]

DRUNK!MORGANA FOR THE WIN!

[jungle_ride]

LMAO! Glad you liked her =D