Title: Snowdrop
Characters/Pairings: Arthur/Gwen
Rating/Warnings: G
Spoilers: Nope
Disclaimer: I own nothing
Summary: Arthur’s thoughts as she watches Gwen scrub the floor.
Word Count: 406
Author’s notes: This was written for the 100 fantasies challenge hosted by
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"Like a snowdrop flower her head was bowed but there was strength in her, grater than the strength theses ladies believed they had."
Yes, because Gwen is so much more resilient, has been through so much already. (Although, nitpick, should be greater not grater)
I knew when I read the summary I'd love this; the cosy domestic scene really being anything but :)
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Also thanks for pointing out that mistake, it has now been corrected. :D
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I love Arthur's observation of her scrubbing a floor while ladies of the sourt twitter by ignoring her. You get the idea that Arthur finds her beautiful because of her imperfections, and that to me is more romantic and meaningful than anything else. Well done! :)
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You get the idea that Arthur finds her beautiful because of her imperfections, and that to me is more romantic and meaningful than anything else
That is exactly what I was trying to portray, so I’m glad that came across.
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I loved it. It was short, but incredibly poignant. I love the way Arthur is so taken in by her despite her plainness compared to the other ladies. I had goosebumps ♥
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