100 Fantasies Challenge: #62 Fic: Snowdrop

Mar 20, 2009 14:19


Title: Snowdrop
Characters/Pairings: Arthur/Gwen
Rating/Warnings: G
Spoilers: Nope
Disclaimer: I own nothing
Summary: Arthur’s thoughts as she watches Gwen scrub the floor.
Word Count: 406
Author’s notes: This was written for the 100 fantasies challenge hosted by Read more... )

arthur/gwen, challenge: 100 fantasies, fanfiction, merlin

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meridian_rose March 22 2009, 14:31:36 UTC
Really nice Gwen fic and how Arthur sees past her peasant exterior to her inner strength and grace.
"Like a snowdrop flower her head was bowed but there was strength in her, grater than the strength theses ladies believed they had."
Yes, because Gwen is so much more resilient, has been through so much already. (Although, nitpick, should be greater not grater)
I knew when I read the summary I'd love this; the cosy domestic scene really being anything but :)

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jungle_ride March 22 2009, 14:43:14 UTC
Thank you so much I’m glad you enjoyed it.

Also thanks for pointing out that mistake, it has now been corrected. :D

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scarlettpeony June 30 2009, 14:09:05 UTC
This was brilliant - very descriptive.

I love Arthur's observation of her scrubbing a floor while ladies of the sourt twitter by ignoring her. You get the idea that Arthur finds her beautiful because of her imperfections, and that to me is more romantic and meaningful than anything else. Well done! :)

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jungle_ride June 30 2009, 17:46:50 UTC
Thank you so much. =D

You get the idea that Arthur finds her beautiful because of her imperfections, and that to me is more romantic and meaningful than anything else

That is exactly what I was trying to portray, so I’m glad that came across.

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fireblazie October 5 2009, 03:01:48 UTC
GAH. It's fic like this that makes me moan in despair about the utter lack of men and Prince Charmings in the Real World, lol.

I loved it. It was short, but incredibly poignant. I love the way Arthur is so taken in by her despite her plainness compared to the other ladies. I had goosebumps ♥

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jungle_ride October 5 2009, 13:51:41 UTC
O WOW thank you ever so much for the comment and compliment! So very glad you enjoyed it! =D

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