Comments | jungle_ride: 100 Fantasies Challenge: #20 Fic:Frustrations And Surprises

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100 Fantasies Challenge: #20 Fic:Frustrations And Surprises

Mar 15, 2009 17:58

Title: Frustrations And Surprises
Characters/Pairings: Arthur/Gwen
Rating/Warnings: PG
Spoilers: Just one slight reference to episode 12 and episode 10
Disclaimer: I don’t own anything; I’m merely playing with the characters. (Ok that sounded less dirty in my head =P)
Summary: Gwen deals with a frustrated maid, works and gets a surprise visit from ( Read more... )

arthur/gwen, challenge: 100 fantasies, fanfiction, merlin

Comments 10

elvishwolf7 March 15 2009, 21:01:03 UTC

wow... you pull these out so easily. I'm so picky with this couple that I'm terrified it sounds wrong... Plus, I don't do the open romance... I always shoot for the hinted... subtle...

Arthur is so not subtle in this... and neither is his Guinevere. I think this pleases him just fine. :D

Well written.

jungle_ride March 16 2009, 00:26:32 UTC

Thank you….. I’m assuming that pulling these out quickly and the fact their not subtle in this, IS a good thing XD and you enjoyed it =P ( ... )

Arthur/Gwen sariza March 16 2009, 04:29:07 UTC

Really well written and I especially like the line

“Yes, like a fool” she chortled “like Merlin.” . It made me laugh. Looking forward to reading more of you stuff. :)

Re: Arthur/Gwen jungle_ride March 16 2009, 15:33:53 UTC

Thank you very much.

Yes that line cracked me up when I wrote it lol ^_^

historygirl345 March 16 2009, 22:55:03 UTC

That was just amazing, I don't how you capture their personalities so well!!! I keep trying to write a fic for these two but every time I do so I end up deleting it all cause their not in character. I am so jealous. Loved it.

jungle_ride March 16 2009, 23:01:32 UTC

^_^ thank you so very much. I always worry there not in character so it’s good to know I’m getting it right :D

I’m sure they are could be you’re just getting too worried about it. I know I was until someone just told me to stop it already because they were fine LMAO. I look forward to reading your works.

Thank you once more for the lovely comments and best of luck with your fic’s.

archaeologist_d March 19 2009, 19:59:18 UTC

That was sweet. I liked how Gwen was so happy before and even happier afterwards!

jungle_ride March 19 2009, 23:16:31 UTC

Thank you. Well after that how could she not be happier XD

dfriendly June 10 2009, 02:54:25 UTC

Gwen & Arthur are so cute in this. Naughty Arthur for distracting her from her work ;)

Loved it.

jungle_ride June 10 2009, 12:24:32 UTC

He he I know what a bad boy, but then I wouldn’t complain and I don’t think Gwen minds all that much ;-)

Glad you enjoyed it =)