the spark before the dark.

Aug 12, 2013 01:55

the spark before the dark.
kris/suho - nc-17 - angst - a little smut - 4704 words
robots!AU. it’s the curiosity that pushes him to keep going.

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fandom:exo, !fanfic, pairing:kris/suho, rating:nc-17

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hipployta August 11 2013, 20:21:12 UTC
Oh...the ending...oh...Yifan will not be erased eh?

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junfhongs August 12 2013, 07:40:40 UTC
kyuhyun had a heart and he decided not to get kris reprogrammed so... yay happy ending! ((kind of))

<3

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nadinadara August 11 2013, 23:21:39 UTC
god how cute is this?!??(and angsty)
((and I still love you even though you kinda left us hanging.like.does yifan only remember his name??? does uifan remember what they've gone through??? why does he still remember junmyeon! ?!?? lol))

lol robot!yifan is as confident as irl yifan when it comes to his artistic talents

I love this a lottttt ; ^ ;

sucks that kyuhyun took yifan away from junmyeon sobs why did you??? and then, and then they met again and we're just like OHMYGOD WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN NOW and then it ended.

I guess it's most likely a happy ending for them though ((YES)) so thank you for writing this and sharing it with us.it's so cute, reading about yifan being more humanized as each day with junmyeon passed by ♡ ((though I almost shrieked when he almost shut himself down.for life.)) ♡♡♡

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junfhongs August 12 2013, 07:39:52 UTC
/sends you all my love bc of this comment

okay the official story is that kyuhyun was possessed by the spirit of a kind angel and he decided not to reprogram kris but he made sure that yifan and joonmyun wouldn't meet bc he needs the model to work

and i had a deleted scene at the end lol here's one part of it:

"i... i think i'm overheating." yifan says while joonmyun cuddles up beside him. he doesn't know if the thin layer all over yifan's skin is sweat or something else. he brushes away the hair plastered on yifan's forehead.

"oh god i'm sorry. isn't there a ventilation system inside of you or something?"

damn i really like this au

thank you for the lovely comment!!

<3

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nadinadara August 12 2013, 08:53:42 UTC
I think I just screamed

bye

just know that I love you

for this...cos...

ventilation system

/showers you with rainbows and fluffy unicorns ♡♡♡¤¤

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junfhongs August 12 2013, 07:31:52 UTC
yes i promise to do something else in this au one day!! i'm actually planning to make a SeKaiLu fic rn

<3

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flowerymisha August 12 2013, 14:31:28 UTC
EXCUSE ME I ALMOST STRANGLE MYSELF IF IT TURNS OUT TO BE A SAD ENDING SOBS

THIS IS REALLY GOOD I REALLY LOVE WHEN YIFAN INITIATES THE KISS SDHAHKSDAKJDHJAHD

I'M SORRY FOR THE BROKEN CAPS LOCK YOU JUST DESERVE IT T___T

/hugs

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junfhongs August 13 2013, 07:58:11 UTC
MISHA YOU IS MY FAVE OKAY I JUST... ASDFGHJKL;

/hugs back

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zhonqda August 23 2013, 00:50:12 UTC
omfg i teared up at this the way u write this really really makes me feel like i want yifan to automatically poof to a human and be with junmyeon and fucking kyuhyun all junmyeon is doing is teaching yifan to feel and sometimes you cannot control feelings it just happens u g h like that AI movie and u gh ok im really tearing

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junfhongs August 23 2013, 02:49:06 UTC
YOU JUST MENTIONED AI AKA MY MAIN INSPIRATION FOR THIS FIC IM SOBBING Y E S

/calms down

and yes omg this comment just summarizes the entire fic perfectly i'm freaking out thank you so much for reading!

<3

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zhonqda August 23 2013, 03:49:19 UTC
Omg I'm glad c: c: Have I told you I love that movie to pieces? Coz I do and its so sad how I feel for these robots TT

NO THANK YOU FOR WRITING. <3

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