I Need Him / G

[xginaxbbyx]

I Need Him
01: Wind // Taekyeon / Taekyeon & Taekyeon / Jaebum // G

A/N: Told in Taekyeon’s point of view. This is written sorta like how someone would think to themselves.

Comments

[bluemonkiesx]

aigoo, that last part.

“What time is it now?”

“It’s 2PM baby.” Jay cracked a smile and a tear ran down his face.

this was good, very good ♥~

[nhijumma]

I loved it. Made me want to cry, but I just saw some major Khunyoung at the SBS gayo daejun and my tear ducts have been sucked dry due to the massive happiness I received. XD The thing I loved about this fanfiction is how your words perfectly expresses the fast paced-ness of Taec's environment.

"People skating, walking dogs, riding bikes. Busy, busy, busy. Walking around, things seem quieter."

Like this for example. The choppiness of the sentence, the repititions and the abrupt use of commas really helped deliver that feel. You've done good. :)) Please write more!

<3, Nhixxie. :))

[rustyrabbit]

I think the story turned out great.
Especially the moments when Taec is reminiscing about the past & such.
The ending was really sweet.
Believe it or not, the ending made me feel warm & fuzzy inside.

“What time is it now?”

“It’s 2PM baby.” Jay cracked a smile and a tear ran down his face.

Great job.

[misschatelle]

OMG please Jay come back please please please.

I love Jaetaec so much.
Thank you for sharing this. I needed it.

[ochamaru101]

I found this fic by just surfing around. This coupled with 2AM's Can't Let You Go makes it somewhat bittersweet lol. Reading this makes me even more motivated to finish the translation of this one Taekbum fic I have lol XD But in all seriousness, I liked it~ It's really good T-T It turned out well~