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adafrog September 29 2008, 23:03:55 UTC
Great little story. Liked the idea of Tony being a mutant.

One thing. even if most of his patience were beyond caring You mean patients.

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meanthis September 29 2008, 23:38:55 UTC
Thanks for the feedback!
*going now to correct the mistake* thanks!

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amanda_is_wacky September 29 2008, 23:39:47 UTC
A collection of scenes it may be, but it flows really well. I'd certainly be interested in seeing more of this universe if you write it.

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jumping_spheres September 29 2008, 23:44:54 UTC
There are two more snippits in this universe posted here. Just use the tags to find them. I haven't posted them at ncisfanfic yet because I wanted to wait to see if anyone would like this stuff.

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mylogiceatsyou September 29 2008, 23:40:40 UTC
Ooh, I like the idea of Tony as a mutant. Nice.

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meanthis September 30 2008, 09:56:17 UTC
Glad you like it. Thanks for commenting.

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gokuma September 30 2008, 14:43:51 UTC
Interesting idea. I'd like to read more :)

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ancientcitadel October 1 2008, 13:04:34 UTC
Oh, I really like this. Normally I wouldn't go for a one of the team is a mutant story, however this works. Even the snippet style works for this. :)

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jumping_spheres October 1 2008, 17:55:49 UTC
Glad you liked it! Thanks for the feedback

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