For blue, blue skies
Title: Collision Course (13b/13)
Pairing: Steven Gerrard/Xabi Alonso, Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres, Harry Kewell/Steve Finnan
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: This is all fiction. I don’t own the boys. If you don’t like slash, don’t read.
A/N: Collision Course | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Part 5 | Part 6 | Part 7 | Part 8 | Part 9 | Part 10 | ( Read more... )
Pairing: Steven Gerrard/Xabi Alonso, Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres, Harry Kewell/Steve Finnan
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: This is all fiction. I don’t own the boys. If you don’t like slash, don’t read.
A/N: Collision Course | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Part 5 | Part 6 | Part 7 | Part 8 | Part 9 | Part 10 | ( Read more... )
Boy, I can't believe I haven't been home for two days straight to give you your promised review. But now I read the second part of the chapter again, so I (hopefully) remembered everything I wanted to say, so here we go.
Seeing how Dan was so worried when they found that Fernando wasn't there was really touching. Just tells you everything you need to know. :-) (And a quick but loud and heartfelt squee to the image of Stevie and Nando in bed like this...)
“Why are you being such a bitch?”
“Why are you being such a retard?” Xabi retorted.
Mwaha, Xabi just rocks in that scene. No need to say more.
Thehe, how Harry tried to keep Fernando out of their room made me laugh. What I really liked, however, was how Finns instantly knew what was up, or rather what Dan had done (again). “Great, I’m stuck in a room of Daniel-worshippers. Make me gag.” and just LOL to that. By the way, the scene later on with the two of them also was the perfect way to tie up their story, I'm so glad for both of them. :-)
So, the two episodes during the thunderstorm. For one, it just fits so well, and Xabi and Stevie out in the rain was heart-warming. Somehow it's a setting that's almost a little cliché, but every relationship just HAS to go through such a scene at least once! :-D
What I also noticed was how you structured the two storylines that they always fit when you jumped back and forth, how both pairings arrive at their final setting at the same time, how they start kissing at the same time, how there's the knock on their doors at the same time, and still you don't repeat yourself but rather kinda explain what happenes for the one pairing through the respective other. That was ingenious in my eyes. :-)
Oh, and “Stevie, we were so good together.” and “I want to kiss you so badly right now.”? Absolutely epic. Just as I've never seen such a cute, helpless declaration of love before! *squeezes Dan to death*
Last thing I've got to say to those two storylines: Can I marry Mikel? Please?
And you ended the chapter like you started it - I don't have to say anything to that anymore, you should know by now what I think of that. *g*
So, yes, happy tears. Thanks so much for writing this story, it's one I'm gonna print and bind and read it again and again. :-)
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Alright, just wanted to add that. (Hope I won't find anything else I just HAVE to comment on that I forgot now. *g*)
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Guh, I know, I have reached a low and used the all time Drama in the Rain cliche. But I like the rain and I like S/X in the rain and it fit so good. XP
Yes, you can marry Mikel! But in my head, in this universe, he was secretly shagging Mikel Arteta. And that sometime, someday, Xabi will find out and will be all HA YOU KEEP LECTURING ME ABOUT STEVIE BUT YOU'RE SLEEPING WITH MIKI. Num, yes. Sometimes, my characters are still alive in my head. o.o
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LOL the two Mikels, seriously? How come we never got to see him then? :-D (I can really see that scene happening though. *squee* And since they're both very good-looking boys... Yum.)
So will you ever write any additional scenes/vignettes to this? Just curious. :-)
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