Waiting for you on the corner of the street

Sep 09, 2008 21:52

Title: Collision Course (12/13)
Pairings: Steven Gerrard/Xabi Alonso, Fernando Torres/Daniel Agger, Steve Finnan/Harry Kewell
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: This is all fiction. Don’t sue me. If you don’t like slash, don’t read it.
A/N: Collision Course | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Part 5 | Part 6 | Part 7 | Part 8 | Part 9 | Part 10 | Part 11Read more... )

collision course series, steven gerrard, harry kewell, fiction, stephen finnan, xabi alonso, fernando torres, daniel agger

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rayziz September 9 2008, 13:59:46 UTC
AM I THE FIRST??AM I???
MUAHAHAHA
it's not the final chapter...you know how happy that makes me?

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jumping_down September 9 2008, 14:03:26 UTC
YOU ARE A FANGIRL, HAHAHAHAHAHAHA. You have no idea how happy that makes me. 8D

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rayziz September 9 2008, 16:49:09 UTC
OMG OMG OMG!!!adadasd!SDDAS!
I can't waaaiiit for the last part(I can't believe I'm saying it)!!

Stared at Fernando on the bed with his dishevelled hair and his shirt riding up his torso and his legs around Daniel’s waist.

THAT, gave me the best picture ever!!(and the best part and not because it's danny and fernando, seriously)*imagines*
mmm.and and the legs on the sides. Is it wrong that I loved this part in particular? Is it? Because when I think about it, it does seem like it, but when I don't think about it...it doesn't. It's not wrong.(Major kudos to you, if you got what I mean)

I have so many *nice* images in my head now, I need an LJ mem thing for my brain.

Please, for the love of everything nice, don't take 5 months to give us the finale, because nothing is more important than pleasing us fangirls, right?.

Why hello long comment.

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jumping_down September 9 2008, 16:55:09 UTC
Is it wrong that I loved this part in particular? Is it? Because when I think about it, it does seem like it, but when I don't think about it...it doesn't. It's not wrong.

Oh noes, I fail. I totally didn't get it!! D:

Num. I live for planting nice semi-naked images in people's brains. It is a pretty nice job, I tell you.

Hahaha, okay okay okay. I'm sorry I took so long! I already have half the finale written and most of it all planned, anyway, so I'm estimating a week or two for the finale? 8D

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twisted_suiker September 9 2008, 14:07:12 UTC
OMGOMGYAY!!!

... I dunno why I comment before reading...

*scrolls up*

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twisted_suiker September 9 2008, 14:36:29 UTC
(Okay, proper comment now.)

Loved it! The boys staying a hotel together *waggles eyesbrows* leaving Finns and Harry alone to... bond.

And “Fuckers, I can hear the both of you, you know!” Fernando yelled from the bathroom. Favourite line!

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jumping_down September 9 2008, 15:08:20 UTC
Yeaaah. I'm continuing the hotel setting until halfway of the final chapter, so more fun, yes yes? *wiggles eyebrows*

Num. Finns/Harry bonding should be interesting. And how cruel is fate that that pairing is now non-existent in the real LFC squad? MUH. Minus slash points for us.

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jumping_down September 9 2008, 15:07:01 UTC
That's okay because I'll totally jump on your comment. I love pre-reading comments. 8D

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jumping_down September 9 2008, 15:12:25 UTC
Because I started this last year and now half of my characters have left the real squad! It's so depressing. D:

Hee. Sexual tension is good. Boy conversation is good. Glad you liked it. And glad you liked the Harry/Finns! I just threw it in there because Finns never seems to get over Dan and Harry is always a very helpful person. :P

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jumping_down September 9 2008, 18:26:36 UTC
Agh. I caught Chelsea's first match this season against Pompey and Deco's goal was really something. o.o Too bad, I just read Essien got injured seriously?

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iamyourmind September 9 2008, 14:45:44 UTC
*dead*
This part is made of so much win! The banter between the lads is always so much fun :D
I am glad things between Fernando and Daniel are working out a bit. At least they are talking and laughing, not like stubborn!stevie who should really give Xabi a break. He's sorry, alright? Jeez, forgive him already!
I am cheering for Finns/Harry <3 They deserve some rough sex love making. Harry and his straightforwardness = AWESOME! :D

“Don’t you just love our school?”
I certainly do!

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jumping_down September 9 2008, 15:13:42 UTC
YAY! I'm v glad you like the banter. It's hard to think like a boy. o.o

Haha, you know Stevie. He's a miserable git. Let him be. XP

I am cheering for Finns/Harry too! WHO KNEW, RIGHT??

Haha. Okay, that Sami line was super planted because I just wanted a character to pimp my AU, hohoho.

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iamyourmind September 9 2008, 15:23:41 UTC
Well you're doing a fine job. They actually sound like a lot of boys I teach ;] Always teasing each other - about sex, mostly.
Couldn't believe my eyes when I saw Steve Finnan/Harry Kewell at the pairings. I love how "I-so-hate-him-but-I-want-to-talk-to-him-again" they are XD

LOL Shameless self promoting is nothing to be ashamed of ;)

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jumping_down September 9 2008, 15:29:22 UTC
You teach? How cool is that? 8D Hahaha. I supposed. When I'm in my Liverpool-character-mode, all I'm allowed to think of is sex. Football, sex, football, sex, failing school, football, sex. Hee.

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narya86 September 9 2008, 15:20:45 UTC
Not the last chapter, YAY! :-D

My god, how much I loved the banter at the beginning between the boys! And somehow I really like the friendship between Fernando and Harry. It's... cute. *g*

The hotel-room scene totally has got to be my favourite... as Sami came in I just couldn't stop laughing. And it just can't be long now until they're back together.

I just really hope Stevie and Xabi will get it together before this fic's over. ;-) I'm still sorry for both of them. And I just knew there'd be something between Harry and Finns as soon as they had their first scene together. *g*

*sigh* It does make sense that you're going to finish the story since, like you said, so many of them aren't even in Liverpool anymore, but I on my part would read many more chapters, there doesn't even have to be that much of a dramatic plot. I'm just in love with the scenery, that school-teenager-friendship-banter-love-relationship thing is just wonderful (to me).

*goes off to read it again*

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jumping_down September 9 2008, 15:28:19 UTC
but I on my part would read many more chapters, there doesn't even have to be that much of a dramatic plot. I'm just in love with the scenery, that school-teenager-friendship-banter-love-relationship thing is just wonderful (to me).

What. I just totally felt my heart melt into this puddle of flattered, appreciative goo. You totally made my day. ♥

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narya86 September 9 2008, 15:34:02 UTC
:-D You're very welcome. And it's totally true!

I think it's because in such a scenery they're younger, sometimes more innocent, and there are just no worries at all about the press or public caring about certain relationships. In school the characters have different problems, every day ones somehow, more "innocent" ones, and all their friends can still take part in and even knowing it without it becoming a little "unrealistic", and I just totally love that.

Do you know what I mean or did I just ramble? *g*

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jumping_down September 9 2008, 16:58:40 UTC
No, I totally love how you described my work. NYEE, it makes the writing so much worth it given your feedback. Guh. Kk, I'll stop being an emotional writer now, yes.

But I know what you mean! It's actually kind of fun - and maybe the reason why I let this last long as well - to have a different world to step into when you're tired of writing locker room situations and post-match stories and paparazzi details and things like that. And, what's more universal than high school problems like crushes and boyfriends and sex and parties and failing Math?

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