Hikago fic: The Crying Game, I & II (2 drabbles)

[issen4]

Title: The Crying Game, I & II
Author: Luce Red
Series: Hikaru no Go
Word Count: 100 each
Rating: General
Challenge: Tournament.
Notes: The tournament in question is made-up. I think I'm having too much fun with this.

Comments

[ramble_corner]

hehe kawai....

Touya freaking out in the toiler?? o..O.
Why does that remind me of Ochi?? XD

[issen4]

Because Ochi spends most of his time there? (Let's hope he grows out of the habit.) ^_^

[aishuu]

This just struck me as hysterically funny and so in character. I love it.

[issen4]

I was wondering if it would sound funny, or insane... glad you liked it!

[euphyi]

Oh, this killed me. Hikaru /would/ cry because he lost a chance to play, and the idea of Touya Akira freaking out in the toilet because he made a thirty-five-year-old Shindou Hikaru cry- is all the more funny because I can almost see that happening! And the comparison between drowning a kitten and making Hikaru cry- priceless!

[issen4]

TOUYA: Stop crying, Shindou! You're making me look like the villain!
HIKARU: (sniff, sniff) Wahhhhh!
WAYA: Ladies and gentlemen, I present to you... the top players of this generation!

Glad you enjoyed this.

[d_grayman]

Haha! This was really funny! *And* really well written! I'm really glad you're part of this community, issen4! Your drabbles rock XD

[issen4]

Thanks! This is a nice community: especially when the challenge makes me want to write.

[caithion]

Those are great! I love how you slip in: "Oh yeah, and he's thirty-five". Poor Touya....

[issen4]

Both of them are thirty-five, but Touya gets to be the bad guy. ^_^

Glad you liked them!