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Criminal Minds/NCIS fic: Reciprocity

Dec 04, 2009 19:52

Title: Reciprocity
Author: jujuberry136
Rating: PG-13
Pairings: Reid/Ziva
Warnings: Language, violence
Word Count: ~3000
Summary: Reid and Ziva have a reciprocal arrangement. In the same ‘verse as Some Days you’re the Statue (from my Five Times Reid is More Social Than You Think drabbles) and Coffee.
Note: Thanks so much to ambrosia4all for the fantastic beta, and for ( Read more... )

fic:xover, reciprocity, reid/ziva, fic:criminalminds, fic

Comments 23

fabrisse December 5 2009, 04:00:35 UTC

I love the parallel interrogations. *G*

Very nice.

jujuberry136 December 5 2009, 04:21:46 UTC

Aw, thanks!

It was only after my beta pointed it out that I realized I wrote a Reid/Ziva story without any scenes of them interacting...*grin*

Thanks for reading!

kyrdwyn December 5 2009, 05:18:08 UTC

Hee. Mess with one, you have to deal with the other.

Which would be interesting to see Ziva and Spencer team up on Morgan and/or Tony. :)

Nice fic!

jujuberry136 December 5 2009, 13:16:07 UTC

Oh great, now the bunnies are coming out to play ;)

Thanks for reading!

rothesis December 5 2009, 05:29:38 UTC

These are great. Not sure how I missed coffee before, but I do enjoy this series. Hope you write more.

jujuberry136 December 5 2009, 13:16:47 UTC

Aw, thank you! I'm glad you like the series so far.

alkja December 5 2009, 09:50:39 UTC

This was absolutely great. You know, I didn't know it was possible to write stories about a couple without having them interact with each other but you're menging it incredibly well :-D And in any case, the respective teams' perpetual befuddlement at the relationship is a total delight.

Morgan and Prentiss both jumped. Morgan turned around and was ready to give whoever had snuck up on him a piece of his mind when he realized who the brunette standing behind him was.

Sneaky Ziva! At the FBI they're not used to having people pop out of thin air. They need a seminar at NCIS

And he knew Garcia hadn’t told her that Reid was dating Agent David-crazy woman had threatened to post the video she filmed of him doing the Snoopy Dance if he told.

Garcia in MamaBear!mode, protecting her young.

“When Spencer wakes up I’d like to tell him the girl has been found. He’ll want to know,” she replied as she continued to walk.Lovely. Ziva wouldn't be fretting and pacing uselessly outside of an OR, she would be getting the job done so he can have good ( ... )

jujuberry136 December 5 2009, 13:20:59 UTC

That dedication to their work is one of the things that makes me think they can work as a couple. Thank you for once again putting my personal fanwank into words.

Haha, I totally have a competence kink- I love it when everyone is doing their job and doing it awesomely.

I think this is the first time someone found Rossi comforting.

Rossi will be surprised for months to come.

Or alternately, the entire family will sit him down for an "Are you sure you know what you're doing?" intervention. I have the sneaking suspicion Rossi would go "Atta boy!", though.

As Morgan said, the team mostly thought Reid was asexual, so Rossi and Morgan are super proud- just super confused. I think only JJ and Prentiss would really be concerned because they'd focus on the Mossad part (unlike Rossi and Morgan who are all- sweet! girl!)

alkja December 5 2009, 10:09:51 UTC

Crap. This was Supervisory Special Agent Reid, Ziva’s…boyfriend. McGee still had issues with that one, but nowhere near the size of Tony’s. The man hadn’t shut up for three weeks after Ziva had ditched him and the other FBI agent to go on a date with Reid. McGee privately suspected that Ziva threatened Tony into silence-the man hadn’t teased her about her “geeky studmuffin” for the last two weeks.

The relationship is just as confusing when seen from NCIS perspective. Ziva, however, does her own threatening.

“You’re dealing with a serial bomber, right?” Reid questioned. “I deal with serial offenders all the time. It doesn’t make any sense for me to go home.” He pulled a chair up to McGee’s desk, “Can you show me the locations of the previous bombs?”

Fretting doesn't accomplish anything. Unleashing the awesome, on the other hand...

“This is breaking one of his rules Probie, which is way worse than breaking one of Vance’s,” Tony replied after checking to make sure they were alone in the room.   “Which one?” McGee asked curiously. ( ... )

jujuberry136 December 5 2009, 13:23:04 UTC

Ooooh! Bitchy!Reid, one of my favorite Reids! I'm sorry Ziva didn't get to see the pwoning of Tony, but I'm sure McGee will spread the tale.

My favorite thing to write is bitchy!any character ;)

McGee will certainly not let this story die, not matter how much Tony would like him to.

Thanks for reading! And thanks for the luck on school work!