Criminal Minds/NCIS fic: Coffee

Oct 04, 2009 21:29

Title: Coffee

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fic:xover, reid/ziva, fic:criminalminds, fic

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kyrdwyn October 5 2009, 01:55:45 UTC
*giggles* I can so see Reid and Ziva together.

and Vance in full drag hitting on Gibbs? I so wanna see that.

*giggles more at Petty Officers Bernero and Bellisario*

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jujuberry136 October 5 2009, 02:01:52 UTC
Yeah well, Bernero and Bellisario just jumped in when I asked for volunteers for dead bodies ;)

Reid and Ziva just *work* for me, glad they do for you too!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I really love getting feedback :)

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fabrisse October 5 2009, 02:25:43 UTC
Cute ending.

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jujuberry136 October 5 2009, 11:48:36 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing :D

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I love you! alkja October 5 2009, 07:45:45 UTC
OMG you really wrote it, thank you so so much!
This was great and funny and wonderfu l andI could just hear all the characters' voices!
Tony and McGee were so much annoying siblings. Morgan was so cool. I think Morgan and Tony would get on great and I loved heir shared bafflement on Reid/Ziva. Speaking of which, I liked very much R/Z's professionalism during the case, how they didn't give anything out until it was done: I have a thing for mature relationship (which are difficult to find on tv shows).
The only thing is, I now really want to see this and I know it won't happen, and that makes me sad. You have funneled my addiction, which maybe wasn't a good idea.
Anytime you want to write more about this little universe, please do so, it's really enjoyable.
Sorry for not commenting sooner, but I'm Italian and time zones are a pain.
Again, thank you so much and well done!

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Re: I love you! jujuberry136 October 5 2009, 11:52:36 UTC
Of course I wrote it, it just happened to take a long time... (whoops)

Glad it worked- I felt bad because I wanted to write a story more inline with your prompt (you know, that featured Ziva and Reid speaking more than five lines total) but Tony and McGee insisted on getting some face time, LOL.

Haha, there might be more of this one day. They're fun to write!

Again, sorry for taking so long to get back to you on your prompt, but thanks for playing!

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alkja October 5 2009, 08:01:45 UTC
PS I have seen you're going to be busy right now and only plan to maybe write short fics. So I'm doubly grateful you wrote this.
If you're still taking prompts, may I suggest in general sense some snippets continuing on the '5 times...' universe? Or even more in general CM crossovers? Because you're really good at them. I mean, I don't even watch The Big Bang Theory and I loved Reunion. CM/Numb3rs is a potential goldmine. Reid interacting with the various tv geeks would be priceless.
And of course I'm greatly anticipating the possible sequel of 'The time has come...'
Sorry if I come off as pushy, that's not really my intention. I guess I'm just trying to say that I truly love your works and always appreciate when you're able to gift us with another one.

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jujuberry136 October 5 2009, 11:55:18 UTC
I'm glad you like my crazy crossovers. My beta teases me all the time that it's all I seem to write (my excuse is that CM is just so easy to cross!) :)

It's not pushing when you're paying a person a compliment! Honestly, it makes me so happy that someone really likes what I write that I LOVE it when you ask for more.

Of course, I can't promise anything given my psycho schedule for the next few months but I'll definite keep these suggestions in mind for when I have some downtown.

(P.s. You might really like the Big Bang Theory. It's a hilarious show and Sheldon is made of awesome)

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eiffelicious October 5 2009, 14:46:20 UTC
Your NCIS team interactions are perfectly in character! And Reid + David = adorable (though Ziva would cheerfully murder anyone who referred to her thusly) Is there a sentence missing after they "bumped shoulders"? There's a word hanging there, and I don't want to miss any of their interaction!

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jujuberry136 October 5 2009, 18:38:20 UTC
D'oh! This is what happens when I post before letting my beta look at things.

No there wasn't supposed to be more after that sentence. I had considered it, but ultimately decided against adding more. Apparently I didn't go back and fix that :(

Thanks for pointing it out to me!

I'm glad the NCIS characters felt in character to you! They're certainly fun to write. And yes, though Ziva would happily murder me for saying this, Reid and Ziva certainly are adorable together.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate it!

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