fic for yamapea

[spurious]

Title: Blind Spot
Rating: PG-13
Threesome: Koki/Kame/Jin
Summary: Future fic. This isn’t just random sex that will be forgotten in the morning. This is real and the stakes are high.
Warnings: Some angst.
Notes: Written for yamapea. I could say so many things about this fic, but then the notes will be just as long as the fic itself. Lets just say that it

Comments

[sadnlonleyme]

=] =].... wow... Jin was gone for a long time.

love how koki can forgive jin for leaving once but the second time was a no no. =]

XD pi as a father is awww...

loved the story

[asinful]

Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)

[gingifere]

I really liked this. I love the twist of Jin leaving and how you don't give us any reasons why, because it allows us to make up our own reasonings. I especially love how you have Kokame in a relationship even if it isn't exclusive, but Koki still resigned to the fact that Akame have something and how he doesn't try to break them apart. I also really liked the bit about Yamapi, because he's always struck me as the type to settle down and have children. All in all lovely :D

[asinful]

The Yamapi bit was my favourite by far, even if I did think that I might get skinned alive for marrying him off. :)

I'm so happy you bothered to read this whole thing. ♥

[yamapea]

[yamapea]

No worries, Pea dearest. :) I'm just glad to know that you don't hate it completely. Because sakghdafkjgadfb but I know this fic is not all that it could have been in the hands of a better writer. This was a way too ambitious undertaking for poor old me. :( Also, I was totally terrified when Laura assigned you to me! SO MANY EXPECTATIONS TO LIVE UP TO. And to make it all worse, as I was writing this, I kept feeling that I'm sort of ripping off your own Kame/Koki/Jin fic, which happens to be the first fic with this threesome that I ever read.

As for me knowing you.... idk. Maybe? ;DD

Shall await your 'better, more detailed comment' eagerly. ♥

[yamapea]

[asinful]

fldjkfdgdfkhdfkgv Blushing here, you realise. This fic is hardly flail worthy. But it was a pleasure to write for you and I'm over the moon that you actually liked it. ♥

[ky_rin]

I'm happy you included so many of Jin's other friends in this. I also like how bittersweet this fic feels. I especially liked the part about the keys and how Kame hasn't changed his lock all those years for a reason, Koki calling Kame Kame-chan.

Koki notices this - he always notices everything about Kame - and he sighs again, rubs a weary hand across his eyes and shakes his head, half-sad and half-exasperated. “What am I going to do with you?”
oh my heart I love your Koki so much!

♥!

[asinful]

The keys. Gawd. So much little thoughts went into this fic. It's crazy. And thank you for liking my Koki since I think I fail at writing him. ♥

[gabo0]

Koki <3