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Jan 28, 2009 07:31

Title: In a Different World
Pairing: L x Light
Rating: A nice, tasteful PG.  Especially tame compared to my last couple offerings. XD
Word Count: 1300
Disclaimer: Not my manga; not my boys.

We lay, we lay together, just not too close, too close (how close is close enough?)
~"Make Damn Sure"~Taking Back Sunday~

The clock was ticking.

It was the only sound ( Read more... )

death note, l/light/l, fanfic, addicted to paragraph breaks

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asimaiyat January 28 2009, 21:12:11 UTC
Aww, why did you have to make me all sad? :(

I really liked "the question was, were they more than that, or less?" and "Anything is a big jump up from zero." :) Very elegantly done.

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joyinthedance January 28 2009, 22:03:46 UTC
If it's sad it's doing its job, I suppose. XD Thank you! ^_^

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pony_rocks January 28 2009, 22:20:54 UTC
That's beautiful.

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joyinthedance January 28 2009, 22:59:23 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked it. :)

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coffinbelltower January 29 2009, 00:24:05 UTC
Ok, I think you just broke my heart. It's funny how a step back from your disturbing one-shots is still majorly angsty. Don't worry, I loved those too ;) I think this really captured the feel of L's impending doom, and I liked how Light recognized that part of himself was going to die with him. This is going in memories, also, had to use apropos icon :)

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joyinthedance January 29 2009, 03:48:16 UTC
Thank you very much! I can't seem to do anything non-angsty, ever. XD Especially not with these two. <3 Thanks for the mem.

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coffinbelltower January 30 2009, 00:40:48 UTC
You're welcome And yea, these two do lend themselves very easily to angst. Actually most of the characters do :)

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amanuensis1 January 29 2009, 00:32:43 UTC
YOW. I could see it being just like this. I feel like I can feel every one of their exhalations on my skin. *shivers pleasantly*

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joyinthedance January 29 2009, 03:49:37 UTC
What a great comment. :D Thanks! <3

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lazy_writer January 29 2009, 01:44:51 UTC
Have I mentioned recently that I adore your writing?

It's so sweet and sad. I expected smexing, but it was just...awwww. Poor L. Poor Light, too, a little, because he really locked himself into this path and even if he wanted to get out of it, he couldn't anymore than L could.

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joyinthedance January 29 2009, 03:51:27 UTC
Awww yay you love my writing! we all know you just want to get in mai pantz.

You know, at first there was gonna be smexing in this fic, but it wrote itself out of existence. It wasn't meant to be. >> And you're right about Light. Poor babies.

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lazy_writer January 29 2009, 03:55:54 UTC
Just a little bit. It is loveable!

Aw. But I like teh smexing.

Also, I'm always right. :D

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joyinthedance January 29 2009, 04:06:12 UTC
I'm writing a PWP for them soon. You'll get your smexing.

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