That Shuffling Noise on the Other End of the Phone 3/3

Feb 05, 2011 12:51

Waking up the next morning Puck opened his eyes to a world full of blonde. Somehow during the night Sam had wormed his way up from Puck’s chest, resting his face over Puck’s so their bodies were perfectly aligned and Puck was blinded by the curtain of hair Sam had spread over his eyes. Smiling and breathing in the scent of Sam’s shampoo Puck gently ( Read more... )

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Re: GOOD- joyincreation March 25 2011, 06:31:22 UTC
Hey! I am so incredibly sorry for missing your review for this long, thank god someone just reviewed or I don't think I'd ever see this! Thank you so much for reviewing, it means a lot.

As to the ending of the story, you would be correct Mrs.Puckerman was most upset about having to hear second hand that her son was in a relationship. The reason that Puck brought up that he she didn't approve of Sam was more of a 'why I didn't want to tell you' versus a 'I know this is why you're mad' statement. Puck knows that his mother wouldn't approve of Sam for many reasons, he's a man, he's not jewish, etc., but Puck (and I) believe that she'll come around. He wants to have an honest conversation with her for once, she's not ready (that's pretty much the gist of the ending).

I'm glad that you liked that part, I really wanted to give Puck and Sam those nice clean lines that define what's happening in their relationship at the end because that was really (along with Puck's personal stuff) the whole point of the story, so it's very nice to hear that it was appreciated! Thank you again for your input!

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