SKIN. Part Four.
Title : Skin. 4|4
Pairing : Jongkey. The genuiest ever. and hinted!2min
Genre : Fluff ? Cheese ? Stubborness ? Some of those.
Rating : PG-15.
Disclaim : Minho, you just leave Key being Jong's and Jjong being Key's okay !? Now go cockblock someone else.
Summary : Where Jonghyun goes for the cheese, and Key he is the fondue.
A/N : Guys, I see you. You ( Read more... )
Of course I've read it!! *othervise I wouldn't be commenting it now XD*
I just went to JK LJ, seen your update and just began squealing like crazy. But I had to wait 3 hours still for my sister to let me read it *she was using the computer*
Now, it's like 10:33 PM *I've slept 5 hours today but suddenly I don't feel sleepy at all XD* and I'm just so happy, you wouldn't believe!
I JUST LOVE YOUR WRITING!!
My, I don't really get the 'smutty' thing, I mean- yup, it's really nice to read some NC-17 JongKey stories- but they don't always stay in our memory because there's something missing in it.
Yet, your doesn't include smut but it's so amazing it's now one of my favorite fictions ever♥
I really love the way you described their characters *have I mentioned that before?*, they seem so REAL with their decisions and thoughts... I love the way that Jjong 'apologized' to Kibum *I was biting my nails from nervousness during the party and then the trip on the yacht, I just couldn't wait for them to meet, and yet I had this amazing feeling that probably Kibum had- or I'm only imagining it because I'm sooo into this story- the feeling of the enormous happiness and almost-relief mixed with some stress and waiting for the last piece of puzzle that was missing. Oh, my. *sighs* *
And the last scene... with the rings... with the words of love...
I feel like I'm flying. I truly do.
And, I just can't thank you enough for including DBSK in this fiction ;____: *sobs* *by the way, what do you think of 'Athena' and the whole HoMin thing? Because I really can't get used to it.... *sobs again* *
And I still haven't started reading Mes Premieres because of all those damn exams I have had -.- But I'll do it really soon and definitely!!
And btw.- yup, I liked the links! I loved them! ^3^ The idea of including them was really great, it helped me imagining some things *like yacht XD*
And once again, don't worry about the smut. It wasn't needed that much- I mean, I don't know if it wouldn't ruin the whole thing ^ ^'' I don't mean *don't even think that!!* that you wouldn't do it well, because you would definitely do it amazing, but I just love the way it is- so soothing, romantic, real, passionate and dazzling <3
Kisses!! ^3^
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Oma, it sucks not having your own computer. Lol, I know how happy/squealy I am when fics I love are updated so I would know. I'm just happy you love this :D
I LURVE THAT YOU LOVE MY WRITING BB~~
Woah, one of the faves ? Why thank you sweetie! And I guess what you mean by something missing, like some smut are just filled with lust and nothing more so why remembering that since other fics may be lust-filled too ne !?
kk, Yes you've mentionned it. I just wanted to make them take everything slow. Like not rush it 'oh I think I love you, I love you, you mah boyfriend, let's have sex, end of story' Lol. When I first had the idea of this fic, it was supposed to be a NC-17 one shot, then I couldn't just bring myself to make Jonghyun pounce on Key like that.
Someone else told me that too, I didn't even realized this was angst. But now that you guys said it, it was kinda angsty. Jjong not being there till the very end and making Key wait. I'll confess to you that he told the waitress to wait till Key was fed up of just being there before giving him that biscuit lol. YES YES YES, you got the feeling well. From the very beginning he knew that Jjong loved him too and that he just didn't knew how to express it. And with all the party the yatch and all, you won't do that to apologize to a friend right !? So he knew. But even like that one self will still have doubts or be insecure, and until the other one clearly says that he loves you too ... yes, it was angst xD.
the feeling of the enormous happiness and almost-relief mixed with some stress and waiting for the last piece of puzzle that was missing
MTE!
The last scene was pure fluff. The things girls dream of, guys would never know. Maybe Jjong would since he is key's bff irl !
Athena ? I didn't really think anything special about it. But I hyperlove Keep your head down , it has Hey! don't bring me down's soundtrack if you listen well. And it's just pure DBSK. The way I feel it, is SMent really knows how to exploit one's talent. So Kanye West is no match (maybe Timbaland would do the trick but ... ) so I like JYJ but the TVXQ feeling was missing. It was like DBSK songs but minus 50% of fierceness. Fierceness that is totaly present in Keep your head down. To tell you the truth, my faves are Yoochun, Jae and Junsu. I haven't really been 'close' to HoMin all that time, so I follow JYJ's news like crazy. But I still love HoMin. I was so happy seeing Yunho's signature moves in the MV and Changmin was actually raping and singing in english and I missed his long notes. But I feel like they are constricted by SMent so ... like JYJ can do what they want and what HoMin say is filtered and all ... I don't trust it too much and it makes me sad. ANYWAY, I still support them all. And I love them all like crazy~ ♥
Oh, take your time reading Mes premières, It's still going on anyway. So much chapters left to write ^^; . Just tell me what you think of it as you read ne !?
Aww, I will try to write the smut well. with a title like Skin, smut is expected. And it really was the purpose of this fic to begin with. But it got out of my control lol. And yes I just couldn't make them pounce on each other like that, that doesn't fit with their personalities here so ... .
so soothing, romantic, real, passionate and dazzling
Thanks sweetie, this makes me happy you don't even ;3
xoxo /HUGS TIGHT
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~'some smut are just filled with lust and nothing more so why remembering that since other fics may be lust-filled too ne !?~- EXACTLY!!
'Like not rush it 'oh I think I love you, I love you, you mah boyfriend, let's have sex, end of story' >> THAT'S THE POINT!! Such things doesn't happen in normal life *or maybe I'm missing something?*, that's why I'm not always satisfied with ff with such plote. *which is one of the reasons that makes me love Skin so much*
Angst?? How come?? I didn't mean any angst!! ;o
Actually I'm really impressed about how you manage to write about all these situations, good and bad, and you're not turning it into angst!
It was one of the most romantic things I've ever read in my life ;___;
And, now that you mentioned TVXQ... I was totally out of the news so when I read your reply about 'Keep Your Head Down' I was kinda confused, then run to YT and saw the whole thing and just...
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OH
MY
GOD
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You know, when I saw it for the very first time I wanted to throw my computer out of the window *NOOOOO!!! I WON'T BE ABLE TO READ MES PREMIERES!!! \leaves the computer on the table/*, I was so... ash. Disappointed? I mean, I just COULDN'T watch YunHo looking like a Korean Keanu Reeves without one sleeve of his suit, then Changmin- my poor Changmin, what have they done to him?! And IDK I couldn't stand the sound *good there was some of 'Hey! Don't bring me down' 'cause I love this song as I love the whole MIROTIC album*, the way that computer changed their vocals, and at the ending... DAMN.
But then, I noticed that I somehow like the chorus.
And after listening to the whole song like for 5 times I began liking it *thought at first I was just whining to my friend thing like 'DAMN SM WHAT THE HELL HAVE THEY DONE TO MY DONG BANG?!?!!!*
And I listened to the whole album and thought it didn't feel like TVXQ *well, there's 3/5 of it missing*, I... LIKED IT. VERY MUCH.
As for now, I like 'Maximum' and 'Our Game' the best, but I'v just begun listening to this album, so the number can icrease ;)
And I really started loving JYJ. *well it's the vocally better part of TVXQ actually...* I love 'Empty', 'Still in love', 'Be my girl', I even got used to 'Ayyy girl'.
And I saw a good side in them parting *thought it's NOT GOOD AT ALL*- they're making twice more music. And we can see them in different styles and so on.
*thought I WANT MY DONG BANG SHIN KI BAAAAACK!!!!*
And I wonder how do they feel with each other. I mean, do they keep in touch, etc. I don't want them to part like forever. Oh God.
Sorry for babbling this much, but I have no other Cassiopeia to talk to <3
And, WAAAAAAH, ' So much chapters left to write'>>> YOU JUST MADE MY DAY. *huuuuuugs*
And well, I can't wait for the Skin smut then! And Mes premieres, too!!
Gosh, you got me so hooked, you don't even know *____*
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