The Trouble with Love Chapter 11

Jun 15, 2010 09:49



“... insiders have told our reporter Jack Fern that Lex Luthor stayed with Chloe Sullivan at the hospital at Yukon.
The two were seen leaving the hospital together...”

Bart scrunched his face in disbelief as a video of Lex and Chloe was shown as they left the hospital, with Lex
holding Chloe’s arm in a tight grip. He changed the channel, not ( Read more... )

chloe, george dean, the trouble with love, connor, oliver, rating: r

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slytherinpunk June 15 2010, 00:17:21 UTC
I'm so scared of what Ollie's going to do next. And I'm nervous, who was watching George and Chloe?--Oliver? or Lex? Evil cliffies... Need more. =)

But thanks for updating so promptly. =)

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joyblue June 16 2010, 00:55:56 UTC
More will come soon! The update was brought to you by a win from Japan!

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kitmerlot1213 June 15 2010, 00:51:40 UTC
Another chapter to this fabulous fic!

Chloe's date with George looks like it went well but now we have to worry about someone watching them--YIKES!!

And I can understand Connor's worry over losing Chloe but he has to know that Chloe loves him and she will always be in his life.

And Oliver's deep thoughts are worrying me--I hope he isn't about to do something dumb.

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joyblue June 16 2010, 00:56:35 UTC
Thank you! and Oliver won't so something (too) dumb!

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iluvaqt June 15 2010, 00:56:49 UTC
I wonder if that was Oliver watching Chloe and George from the shadows. I loved sneaky Connor but that Bart figured out what he was up to and talked him out of it. It shows how much Bart's matured that he didn't want to crash Chloe's date. I like how you portrayed him, his thoughts, how he interacted with Connor. I just love Bart and you did him justice.

Oliver's thoughts are jumbled and disturbing. I guess that's probably what you wanted. I can tell if he wants Chloe, or if he just likes the idea of her. Or if he knows it's wrong to expect anything and is going to disappear with Connor. Start over somewhere new.

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joyblue June 16 2010, 00:58:55 UTC
Thank you! I initially was going to have Bart crash the date with Connor, but it didn't feel right, so I went with this route instead!
The next chapter might enlighten people on what's going on with Oliver

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sxymami0909 June 15 2010, 01:05:24 UTC
Oh god...why do I feel like Oliver is either going to take them somewhere else like Star City or cut Chloe out. *cries* Great chapter I'm EXCITED the next part ! :-D

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joyblue June 16 2010, 01:00:35 UTC
Thanks for reading! next part should be up today or tomorrow!

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latetothpartyhp June 15 2010, 01:08:19 UTC
Hm. Is Oliver going to give up being GA? Even after his "upgrade", or whatever it was that happened to him?

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joyblue June 16 2010, 01:01:19 UTC
Secret! for now anyway! more will be revealed in the next chapters!

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