The Trouble with Love Chapter 10

[joyblue]

“I told you, Emil. I’m fine.” Oliver replied as he started to put his shirt back on. It wasn’t just his eyesight that improved.
His sense of hearing had improved as well. He wasn’t going to beat Clark anytime soon with his ‘super senses’, but everything was just sharper and clearer.

“That’s good to hear, I thought you’d be upset with everything

Comments

[kitmerlot1213]

WOO HOO--I adore any mention of the S3 Chlex Summer of Love in the Safehouse :):)

I do wonder why Lex is bringing up the Smallville past like this, and Chloe is right that it's ruining Lex's credibility, not Chloe's. Unless his entire plan is to stir up Ollie's jealousy and possessiveness.

And I love how you're showing Oliver's increased senses--very subtle.

I do like seeing Lois' over-protectiveness regarding Chloe but she has to be careful that she doesn't hurt Connor's feelings.

Can't wait to see what happens next :):)

[joyblue]

Can't have Lex and Chloe in a fic and not mention that!

Whatever Lex is up to will be seen shortly!

[prophet64]

Loved the chapter, great as always :)

Loved how you brought Chloe and Lex and the safe-house bit into the story :)

I saw the game, all i can say is, i'm sorry and ouch, harsh beating. I'm sure they will redeem themselves. *Big Hug* lol
We didn't do to well against USA either, huge mishap from the keeper.

Anyway, Awesome job and can't wait to read more.

[joyblue]

Thanks for reading! So many things could have been explored with Chlex... *sigh*

Yep, and a paper pretty much said we just didn't get beaten, we were slaughtered :( hoping the next two would be a win! And that was a shock draw, I was expecting England to win!

[iluvaqt]

This of it this way. They're one of the top teams in the world. They've won four times. It would have been nice to score at least once, what's most disappointing is that they lost Cahill too :( At least they're there though! I've been listening to my hubby reason out the game all morning

[joyblue]

True that, and there' still two games to go!

George is stepping up! And whatever Lex is up too, there's more to come!

[slytherinpunk]

Loved this update. It was so much to take in and I enjoyed every bit of it! I certainly can't wait for more.

And I was trying not to say this due to your notes in this and the last chapter but... I'm German hun, so please don't hate me for rooting against your team. ♥

[joyblue]

Thank you! Will try and see if the next chapter can be polished a little bit more before posting.

AHA! It's a good thing you love Chlollie or else... :)
Good game though (not for us!), you guys were just the better team...

[ladyhawke01]

Glad to see another chapter up, its interesting to see Lex's plan continue further and that Oliver's senses are becoming sharper now it includes hearing and smelling as well. George seems to perfect, I'm with Connor regarding him "Ugh". And I wanted to smack Lois with that she said in front of Connor that was low. Not thrilled that Chloe agreed to a date with George, but I figured that would happen.

But now I am getting worried, I just want to make sure in the end Oliver and Chloe are together. This story is not predictable which is a great thing, can't wait until the next chapter.

Sorry about your team. I offer you a pint of your favorite ice cream to ease your pain and also as bribery to give us a new chapter sooner rather then later. :)

[joyblue]

Yup, I knew Lois wasn't going to win any votes, but it does have a purpose, even if she shouldn't have said it in front of Connor.

Glad it's not predictable, and hope you like what's next.

Chocolate ice cream will be much appreciated!