Comments | joyblue: The Trouble with Love Chapter 8

joyblue

The Trouble with Love Chapter 8

Jun 08, 2010 22:41

He welcomed her kisses as her lips caressed him on his chest, his neck and finally his lips. He felt her laugh and
he shifted them so she was on her back and he hovered over her as his hands wandered around her body.

He missed this. He missed having her beneath him, holding him close as she tightened her legs around his waist,
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chloe, george dean, chloe/oliver, the trouble with love, connor, oliver, rating: r

Comments 34

alexis374 June 8 2010, 12:51:01 UTC

yaaay! an update! i do really love this fic. it's so different! and i am totally intrigued re Oliver's condition. I can't believe there are another fourteen chapters... that's so much waiting to do! i'm the most impatient person EVER. but i will do my best for this one teehee :D

joyblue June 9 2010, 09:33:44 UTC

Thanks! Hope I can keep the mystery going in regards to
Oliver's condition. Patience is a virtue! :)

xfilefan79 June 8 2010, 13:00:00 UTC

Colur me intrigued, I've got to know what Lex did and how he did it. Love this fic. Can't wait to see what happens next. More soon please.

joyblue June 9 2010, 09:34:33 UTC

Thanks, more on what Lex did next, soon!

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pompeypearly_v2 June 8 2010, 14:02:29 UTC

so loving this comment. I'm all for torturing this Oliver!

ebarb001 June 8 2010, 19:45:43 UTC

me tooo

fresh_09 June 8 2010, 20:14:28 UTC

I totally agree with this! lol.

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kitmerlot1213 June 8 2010, 13:58:42 UTC

This was just excellent!

I know it's wrong, but how much do I love that Oliver still wants to be with Chloe? If he truly wants a relationship with her, he is going to have to work hard to earn her trust back.

And it seems as if Oliver has increased senses--green meteor rock inspired perhaps?

Continued excellent work on this fic :)

joyblue June 9 2010, 09:37:23 UTC

Not wrong at all. And yeah, Oliver's got a lot of work to do.
Is it meteor rock inspired? could be... is it green? That's the question!

pompeypearly_v2 June 8 2010, 14:00:52 UTC

*dancing a giddy dance* yay! Update!

Poor Chloe, she still can't look at him in the face. If it weren't for Connor he deserves to get his ass kicked.

Naughty Lex. Is he turning Oliver into some kind of super soldier?

Hope we don't have to wait long for another update!

joyblue June 9 2010, 09:38:49 UTC

Just a few days for the next update :) keep on the look out for what's happening to Oliver!

pompeypearly_v2 June 9 2010, 09:40:50 UTC

a few days?! noooooooooooo!