Anything for Love 1/?

Aug 16, 2010 22:52


Author: Joy Blue
Title: Anything for Love. Sequel to The Trouble with Love
Rating: R
Summary:  What would you do for love?
Spoilers: Season 9, and a slight spoiler based on the preview for s10
Standard Disclaimers Apply
Warning: adult situations, mild violence and language.

Anything for Love
Chapter 1

To say that Connor Queen was excited was an ( Read more... )

chloe, george dean, connor, oliver, rating: r

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judyku September 19 2010, 21:43:14 UTC
You've started the sequel, Joy, and am sorry it took me so long to respond, but DF has kept me a wee bit busy as I had re-read and translate a fair bit of medical jargon.

Where do I start???

"There was something about him, the past three months was like a breath of fresh air, and she learnt more about him each time they were together, and she enjoyed every moment of it."

How much of Chloe has George gotten to learn? My guess is not much because sharing and letting someone in won't be something she'll do so easily. In this case, I feel sorry for both George and Chloe.

George is a good guy and Chloe needs a good guy, but a good relationship with a good guy will require opening up and trust and all that other stuff. The stuff Oliver worked so hard to build up before he crushed it under his cheating shoe.

"Warning bells began to sound in Oliver’s ears as he looked at Connor."

Consequences, Ollie. Consequences. Not only is Chloe starting to move on, but the son you had with the woman you cheated with is slowly starting to understand. Hope those warning bells ring the selfishness out of you.

"Oliver didn’t know how to respond to his son’s simple question. He knew the answer enough, but vocalising them to Connor was a little more difficult."

I cannot imagine why...

"He should’ve used done everything he could back then to make things right with Chloe, it could be too late now, but he would never know unless he took the chance."

By making things right, you mean proposing to Sandra and her accepting? Cos Ollie, that's about as right as you can get. Or do you mean right by telling her how sorry you were, how it was just the one night, that it would never happen again, that you were so very sorry?

You still did it and you're still looking for a way to find that peace of mind and hey, if that peace of mind comes with Chloe, bonus. I hope you find out just how much her world crumbled because of you and I hope you choke on it's dust.

“Please don’t let them find me... please don’t let them find me.” He chanted as he cowered behind some boxes."

I need to know who this little guy is!!!

Joy, you've done it again and made me emotionally react! I would ask that you stop doing it, but hell! It's fun and I can't wait for the next part!

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