My first Fic

Sep 02, 2008 19:46



Title: Morning Shower
Author: Krystal J. (jotownchica1987)
Disclaimers: Slash/yaoi NC-17
There is some very adult situations going on in this one-shot.  Please if you do not like yaoi (boyxboy) then do not read this story as it does get really graphic.  You have been warned.  I do not own Big Bang and all that stuff blah blah blah.
Genres: Romance, fluff, yaoi
Pairings: SUNDAE!!!!!!
Rating: NC-17

This is my first fic so please be nice everybody.  However, I can take constructive criticism (we all need it).  I paired SunDae in this one because I just don’t see many fics with that pairing.  If you like the story please comment I would really like to know what you think.  If everyone likes this one enough then I will also accept any challenges anyone has for any YG pairing of their choosing (ex: taebinxlexy, se7enxteddy etc…)!!  Thanks and enjoy!!!!!


Morning Shower

Daesung yawned and stretched his arms upwards as he sat up in his Doraemon covered bed.  He took a moment to let his vision return to normal before surveying the room around him…empty.  Usually in the mornings he was awakened by his roommate YoungBae but, this morning YoungBae was nowhere to be found.  Daesung threw off his covers and swung his feet over onto the soft carpeted floor.  He had to fumble around a bit to find his Doraemon slippers.  His side of the room was so messy.  The floor was covered with clothes he didn’t know which ones were clean and which ones weren’t.  Unlike YoungBae’s side, his side of the room was very neat and everything seemed to be tucked away and had its own little space.  He bent over to find a clean shirt off his floor.  He put on the first clean smelling white tank he could find then proceeded to the bathroom down the hall.

When he got to the door he saw steam coming from behind the door.  He peered into the crack of the door curiously to see YoungBae taking his shower.  He watched as the steamy hot water cascaded down YoungBae’s tan, muscular form.  He longed to tell YoungBae exactly how he felt about him but, it just never seemed like the right time.  Daesung watched excitedly as YoungBae started to soap up his glistening wet skin.  He hadn’t even realized he had begun to stroke his hardening member.  YoungBae was starting to rinse off as Daesung watched on the other side.  He was struggling not to moan loudly as didn’t want the other boy to hear him but, when Daesung looked up to watch YoungBae again he was staring straight at him from the shower with a puzzled look on his face.  Daesung jumped back so startled that YoungBae had seen him and ran off into the room that they shared.  YoungBae stood in the shower soaking wet staring out into the now empty doorway.  He would have to talk to Daesung about this.

YoungBae stepped out of the shower and wrapped a towel around his slim waist.  Then he walked over to the mirror and wiped it so he could see himself.  YoungBae had known for some time that Daesung was interested in him.  He found out through a mutual friend of their’s, Dong Wook that guy never really could keep his mouth shut.  Dong Wook told him that the only reason Daesung hadn’t said anything to him was because YoungBae was so unreadable and Daesung thought he would be upset to find out something like that since Daesung didn’t really think he was really YoungBae’s type.  The truth was that YoungBae was delighted about that news.  He himself had been interested in Daesung for some time as well but, he never knew quite how to tell him.  He thought to himself why a guy like Daesung would be interested in a guy like him.  Daesung was this happy-go-lucky kind of guy who was silly, loud, and not afraid to be himself.  Whereas, YoungBae thought of himself as a quiet, passive, deep-thinking kind of a guy.  YoungBae frowned at himself because he really didn’t know what to say to Daesung but, he figured he would know once he got in front of him.  He thought it would be a good time to tell Daesung how he felt about him.  So he threw on the pair of baggy black sweatpants and a green tank he brought with him and went to talk to Daesung but, this time he wasn’t going to be so passive.

Daesung was sitting on his bed thinking how stupid he was to have gotten caught with his hands down his pants like that, and by YoungBae of all people.  He figured he should just apologize to YoungBae and maybe he wouldn’t look too much into it but, just as Daesung stood up YoungBae walked into the room.

Daesung froze and stared as YoungBae walked across the room to where he was standing.

“Good morning, Daesung.”

“Good morning.” Daesung said nervously as he looked down at the ground as if he was searching for what to say next. “Um…I’m sorry for peeking in at you like that earlier; I just wasn’t thinking clearly…I didn’t get a lot of sleep last night.” He said quietly.

YoungBae loved when Daesung got all cute and apologetic like that.

“Don’t worry about it.” Youngbae said laughingly.

He chewed his bottom lip before deciding he was going to do something a little out of character for him. “Did you like what you saw?” he asked.

Daesung’s head snapped up and he looked at YoungBae as if he had never seen him before.  YoungBae chuckled to himself for he had never seen Daesung looked so flustered before.

“I…what are you…”Daesung stammered.

YoungBae smiled at Daesung as he blushed.  Daesung went into full out confession mode talking fast , “I’m sorry hyung it’s just that I couldn’t help myself, the door was open and you were in the shower all…” his voice trailed off as YoungBae had all of a sudden gotten very close to him. “W…what are you doing YoungBae?”  Daesung managed to choke out as YoungBae reached down to grab his hand.  YoungBae looked at Daesung; he was so sexy with his olive colored skin, small eyes that looked like crescent moons when he smiled, and his exquisitely toned and muscled physique.

“Look Dae I am really attracted to you and, I thought that you may have felt the same way about me am I correct?”  YoungBae asked coolly now caressing the back of Daesung’s hand with his thumbs.

“I guess so.”  Daesung replied not expecting what came next.

“Well if we like each other let’s do something about it.” YoungBae said in a low voice.

Daesung licked his lips in anticipation as YoungBae pulled him closer and planted a long, soft kiss upon his full lips.  Daesung opened his eyes as YoungBae broke the kiss to gauge Daesung’s reaction.  He was so happy to see the desire burning behind the younger boy’s pretty brown eyes.  Daesung saw the little sparkle in YoungBae’s eyes and he leaned in for another kiss.  YoungBae and Daesung alike surrendered into the kiss as if they were lovers who hadn’t seen each other in years.  YoungBae buried his hand in Daesung’s soft hair and put his arm around his waist bring him closer.  Daesung could feel a fire burning in the pit of his stomach as his member jerked to life.

Daesung ran his hands down the front of YoungBae’s muscled body as he pressed himself deeper into the kiss.  YoungBae slipped his tongue out of his mouth and ran the tip of it across Daesung’s bottom lip teasing him.  Daesung slightly parted his lips to allow YoungBae entrance.  The kiss deepened as they enjoyed their tongues sliding past each others.  YoungBae started to back away pulling Daesung closer to him as they made their way to Daesung’s bed.  Daesung followed YoungBae as if he were in a trance never wanting the kiss to end.  Then, YoungBae pushed Daesung onto his bed.  Daesung sat up on his elbows as YoungBae descended onto him claiming his lips in a soft but, passionate kiss.  He left a string of pillowy light kisses on Daesung’s neck and stuck his tongue out to sensuously lick across Daesung’s jaw line.  Daesung shivered as YoungBae moved lower to kiss his collarbone.

“Take it off.” YoungBae breathed to the other boy as he anxiously tugged at his tank top.  Daesung sat up and pulled his shirt up over his head before tossing the garment aside, and laid back down on the bed.  YoungBae pulled off his tank top as well and tossed it on the side of the bed before gazing at Daesung’s well toned abs and sculpted chest lying out before him.

“I’m going to enjoy this.”  YoungBae said aloud before leaning down once again to taste Daesung’s lips.  YoungBae ran his hands down Daesung’s body stopping to untie the drawstrings on his pants.  YoungBae slid his hand into the front of Daesung’s pants and started to rub Daesung’s already stiff member.  Daesung moaned into the kiss much to YoungBae’s satisfaction.  Then, YoungBae started to pull off Daesung’s pants.  Daesung lifted his hips so YoungBae could take off his pants with ease.

“What about you?”  Daesung asked as he nodded his head towards YoungBae’s pants.

“You take them off.”  YoungBae responded seductively.  Daesung happily obliged him.  YoungBae’s hard erection bobbed out of his pants as Daesung pulled them down enough for them to slide down YoungBae’s hips onto the floor with an inaudible thud.

Daesung moaned as YoungBae took his thick shaft into his hand and started to pump.  Daesung found YoungBae’s erection and started to pump as well.  He smiled to himself as YoungBae threw his head back in pleasure.  Suddenly Daesung stopped and said “Now comes the fun stuff.”  He then pushed YoungBae over onto his back.  Daesung then, planted an array of butterfly kisses down YoungBae’s torso.  He flicked his tongue out every now and then to taste YoungBae’s skin.  He worked his way down towards YoungBae’s rigid length.  YoungBae bit his bottom lip in anticipation as Daesung flicked his tongue across his tip.  Then, Daesung licked up the side of YoungBae’s member before switching to the underside.  YoungBae moaned loudly as he was very sensitive there.  Daesung licked and kissed up and down YoungBae’s length before taking it completely into his mouth.  Eyes closed in bliss; YoungBae reached down and tangled his fingers in Daesung’s silky hair.  Daesung speed up a little then slowed.  Then he adopted a steady rhythm.  YoungBae panted and moaned at the other boy’s efforts.  Then, Daesung stopped and released YoungBae’s aching arousal from his warm mouth.  He then, flicked his tongue across the head and placed a hand on his base before taking him into his mouth once again.  YoungBae saw stars as Daesung’s efforts became more erratic.  YoungBae surrendered all inhibitions as he groaned and writhed under Daesung’s pleasurable torture.  Then, suddenly Daesung stopped.  YoungBae looked down at him very displeased.  Daesung smiled and crooned, “I want you now hyung.” YoungBae reached over into the drawer beside Daesung’s bed for the lube.  Daesung excitedly took the tube away from YoungBae and squirted a little onto his hand, and then he began to rub the creamy liquid onto YoungBae’s raging arousal.  YoungBae moaned becoming even more excited at Daesung’s actions.

“Turn over.”  YoungBae demanded barely above a whisper.

Daesung smiled as he quickly turned over onto his stomach for his lover.

YoungBae crawled on top of him then, placed his knees on either side of his thighs.  He eased himself into Daesung’s tight entrance little by little until he was completely engulfed in Daesung’s body.  Daesung cried out in pleasure as YoungBae pulled himself almost completely out before pushing himself all the way in again.  Daesung body quaked as YoungBae repeated this motion continuously.  YoungBae had never felt pleasure like this in his life.  He slammed his hips into Daesung’s buttocks and Daesung gasped his moaning building and getting louder as their lust for each other overwhelmed him.  Daesung pushed himself backwards to meet each of YoungBae’s manic thrusts.  YoungBae leaned forward to reach around and stroke Daesung’s throbbing member.  Daesung gritted his teeth and moaned, panted, and groaned as YoungBae gave it to him as hard as he could, hitting him in the right spot over and over.

“YoungBae…”  Daesung gasped out.

“Yes.”  YoungBae hissed realizing Daesung was about to come.  YoungBae stopped and traced one hand up Daesung’s back up to his head and tangled his fingers in Daesung’s hair and pulled up turning his face out, he leaned forward and found his soft, full, enticing lips they both screamed into the kiss as YoungBae thrust hard into Daesung’s body triggering the most intense release either of them had ever experienced.  Daesung dropped down onto his stomach as YoungBae slid out of him and dropped heavily on top of him before rolling off to his side.  Daesung turned over on his back to look at YoungBae and YoungBae put his arm over Daesung’s now sweaty chest almost protectively, “Hmmm I’m going to have to shower again.”  YoungBae said teasingly.

“I think I’m going to come with you this time.”  Daesung smiled.  They both laughed as they were grateful that they were finally able to show each other their true feelings.  Then, wrapped up in each other’s warmth utterly wiped out from this morning’s activities they drifted happily off to sleep.

taeyang, big bang, daesung, yg family

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