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Apr 15, 2007 00:21

Title: My Story[chapter two]
Pairing: Cox/Jordan
Characters: Perry, Jordan, Ben,J.D.
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I own nothing.
Words: 2,086

This chapter takes place in the 80's! Wooh!

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Comments 5

beps_wildorchid June 28 2007, 05:48:42 UTC

I'm loving this immensely.

anonymous July 7 2007, 03:39:06 UTC

Brilliant! I loved how Dr. Cox answered JD's question without telling him anything he wanted to know.

bway_love January 4 2008, 05:51:49 UTC

OH MY GOSH. I thought I loved chapter one. I ADORE chapter two. I've always tried to imagine how they met, and have read and written some fic about it, and could never think of a scenerio I liked/believed enough to be it, but this is completely and utterly PERFECT to be it. In fact, you should send it to the writers of Scrubs or something because when they read it they'll want to use it as backstory. I LOVE your Perry and Jordan, and the dynamic between them. Just the right amount of love and hate, cruelty and playfulness. And when he sees her. And that he met her before when she was fat with braces, and then broke her nose. And then she manipulated him and paid him back. And ahhh!!! I just love their dynamic. And the whole story. I LOVE IT. Please, please, please, I'm begging you to continue! I wana see what happens at their next meeting, well their next meeting in the past, you know...in fact I would love to read their whole history as written by you if it is as wonderful as it has been so far. Best Perry/Jordan fic I've ever read, ( ... )

bway_love January 4 2008, 05:52:58 UTC

Oh, also I love Ben. And that he met her through Ben. But generally I just love Ben. He's the greatest person, friend, brother. Such a great presence. And you really capture it when writing him.

goblue5 January 29 2008, 15:50:29 UTC

Oh I loved this! I was really hoping to see a "Chapter 3 coming soon" somewhere up there, but I guess that's too hopeful...after all, you did wrap the story up nicely. But I was sad to see it was over! I loved Jordan completely taking control of Perry...it's so reflective of their actual relationship. Too funny. I also thought it was amusing that Perry had seen her many times before but she'd been chubby with braces so he barely paid attention to her...there's our vain Dr. Cox! But what I find even more interesting is the fact that they still ended up together...maybe you *could* do a follow-up story! Eh? Eh?

Either way, I really liked this. You did a good job of capturing how I imagine the characters would have been back in the day.