This might be long overdue given the date it was posted, but I still wanted to leave a comment ^^
I like the simplicity of this fic. There's a sense of peace from start to finish; I don't know if that's how you intended it to happen, but that's what I felt while reading it. I like how events are shown in fragments, giving just enough to tease the imagination, but Jongin's adoration for Lu Han is made obvious through it. Sometimes all you need is a short and straightforward piece to get your point across, and you have succeeded in doing so.
I honestly wish I could give a longer comment because this is beautiful, but I have been reduced to an incoherent, smiling fool ^^; Also, in light of recent events, I hope Lukai shooting to your top EXO OTPs is something you don't regret.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and I hope to read more of your works in the future ^o^
this was, by far, the loveliest comment i have ever received from anyone. ♡ i did intend it to have that sort of subtlety and peacefulness because i think it'd make things more sincere and genuine, rather than the loud declarations of love (which i would & could have done, really). :')
lukai is a wonderful, wonderful pairing, & it has made its way to my top pairings (after sebaek, to be exact). i'm really grateful for you, for this comment, & i would try my very best to write more of them! ♡
(i honestly even think this comment isn't enough to show/tell you how flattered & grateful & happy i am.)
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I like the simplicity of this fic. There's a sense of peace from start to finish; I don't know if that's how you intended it to happen, but that's what I felt while reading it. I like how events are shown in fragments, giving just enough to tease the imagination, but Jongin's adoration for Lu Han is made obvious through it. Sometimes all you need is a short and straightforward piece to get your point across, and you have succeeded in doing so.
I honestly wish I could give a longer comment because this is beautiful, but I have been reduced to an incoherent, smiling fool ^^; Also, in light of recent events, I hope Lukai shooting to your top EXO OTPs is something you don't regret.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and I hope to read more of your works in the future ^o^
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lukai is a wonderful, wonderful pairing, & it has made its way to my top pairings (after sebaek, to be exact). i'm really grateful for you, for this comment, & i would try my very best to write more of them! ♡
(i honestly even think this comment isn't enough to show/tell you how flattered & grateful & happy i am.)
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