15 Seconds

Jul 07, 2010 18:02


Title: 15 Seconds
Characters: Connor, Nick
Rating/warning: Pg
Synopsis: Connor ponders time and relationships.
Word count: 478
Disclaimer: Nope, I don't own Primeval.
AN: Still working on trying to find my Connor voice...
Spoilers: End of season 2 when this is set.

It was a long time before he had the time to think. And when he did, he found himself ( Read more... )

connor temple, primeval, fanfic

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Comments 33

fredbassett July 7 2010, 17:21:22 UTC
That was lovely!

*surreptitiously wipes tear away with a floppy ear*

I loved that moment when Connor stayed there, even though he was obviously terrified, and you've captured it beautifully.

Welcome back, btw. *waves* I'll put my thinking cap on for a prompt for you.

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jooles34 July 9 2010, 16:42:54 UTC
Thank you so very much. I'm really pleased you think this worked. That moment just cried out to me as being such a good example of how strong he is and just begged to be written. I'm so pleased you think I did it justice.

Prompts loved.

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nietie July 7 2010, 18:06:37 UTC
Beautiful! Very strong last line.

He was a geek, but now geek was good. That's our Connor.

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jooles34 July 9 2010, 16:44:03 UTC
Thank you, and I'm really pleased you liked the ending. And Connor is our geek god. Thanks for commenting.

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lukadreaming July 7 2010, 18:09:08 UTC
Very vivid and poignant.

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jooles34 July 9 2010, 16:44:35 UTC
Thank you. Glad you liked it and thank you for commenting.

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prehistoriccat July 7 2010, 18:18:17 UTC
I really loved this! Captured perfectly and actually quite thought provoking. Brilliant.

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jooles34 July 9 2010, 16:45:43 UTC
Wow, thank you so much for such an awesome comment. So pleased you think this worked.

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mrhattersgirl July 7 2010, 19:29:45 UTC
Wonderful. Simply wonderful.

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jooles34 July 9 2010, 16:46:18 UTC
*glomp* thank you so much for such a lovely comment. So glad you like it.

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