(no subject)

Nov 16, 2004 22:07

something quick and short

"Hi."
"Hey! How's it going."
"I've been meaning to tell you something."
"Really? shoot."
"Your boyfriend is a dick, he just wants your body."
"...um"
"You're entire life you've been walked over by people undeserving of your kindness."
"..."
"You're entire life you've been sweet and caring and people take advantage of you."
"i"
"And frankly it pisses me off."
"don't"
"I want to take you away from all of this."
"but"
"I want to say 'I love you' every day."
"you?"
"I'm sorry, I'll just leave now, I've said everything that matters to me."
"I think my boyfriend is here."
"I love you, but I don't think I should anymore, not with the people you fall in love with."
"You're crazy."
"I know. He doesn't deserve you and you don't deserve his crap, last chance to get a ride out of hell."
"Who do you think you are?"
"A person who's in love with someone pushed too hard as a child and has had their ego smashed into a thousand pieces and cannot take failure and constantly seeks a person to provide comfort and all the times ends up with a person who's interests extends no further than the inside of his pants."
"..."
"Good bye."

i wrote it last night. it seems to have gone over well in the writing community i'm in
Previous post Next post
Up