.0108 - Give a Little Time to Me, We'll Play Hide and Seek

[jojothecr]

Jensen/Jared (Jensen/Danneel, Jared/Genevieve)
3,121 words
Warning: Infidelity/open marriage [weird plot and strange style of writing]
Title from Ed Sheeran
Teaser: Critics' Choice Movie Awards / "I can’t keep on waiting for it to happen. Every time we make love… I’m expecting you to cry out his name. Each night you spend up there, I'm imagining

Comments

[wings128]

Thank you for writing this. It's style is perfect for the story you're telling. I loved that you gave D her own feelings and her own thoughts and acknowledged that her situation must suck, even when the world sees being with Jensen as the ultimate prize.

This is beautiful, sad, jagged, fragile, but still carries an undercurrent of hesitant hope.

This bit...
The night before their wedding; Jensen’s bachelor party. The closest of his friends, guitars and whiskey, melancholy. And Jared. The last kiss of an unmarried man, free yet; less of guilt, more regrets. She wasn’t supposed to see that, them, but at the same time, she was almost convinced he wanted her to see it. The kiss was slow, tender, unhurried. Until then she thought it was only sex, loneliness that dragged from early seasons, and want. But he made her see that it was more, far more than what she was prepared for… Pulling from the kiss, Jensen stepped back and out of Jared’s arms, reluctant. When he reached out to brush a strand of hair out of Jared’s face, Jared leaned down to kiss the inner side of Jensen’s wrist, whispering into his skin something she couldn’t hear. And perhaps it was for the best.

I really enjoyed this, and I'm off to tell two friends about it :D

[jojothecr]

I cannot imagine writing Danneel differently than as a person with feelings. Some people maybe like to write her as a mindless bitch, but I can't. She is a human being after all, and I like her. And I hope and believe they're happy like this, all of them, 'cause otherwise it'd be really freaking sad. But this is a fic, so...

Anyway, I'm really glad you liked it. Thank you much! :)

[wings128]

Yes they do, and yes she is. I think if I ever get the courage to write a J2 fic that includes either Danneel or Gen, then I'd write them as their own characters too; it's only fair.

I enjoyed it very much, I wouldn't normally read something that included the wives, nor something under NC17; but I was drawn in by your note about "strange style of writing".

I recc'd it to two friends, one who read it today and loved it.

[jojothecr]

I understand. I, for a change, don't read most kinks. I don't read Jensen/Danneel (or J/G) either, only if there's at least one of the boys included. Now I realize how monothematic my writing actually is, basically just Jensen/Jared (with Jen/Dan & Jay/Gen), infidelity and open marriage... Gosh, I am boring. ;)

Thank you! :)