.0107 - Mi corazón de cenicero

Jul 06, 2013 17:17

Jensen/Jared (Jensen/Danneel, Jared/Genevieve)
3,249 words
Warning: infidelity, language, smoking
Title from Placebo
Inspired by Zwillinge (short/gay/incest)
Teaser: “Tell me to stop,” Jared said, and it sounded like a plea and a warning at once. "Stop me."
Now with gorgeous art made by darklondonsky

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.pairing: jensen/jared, length: 1k to 5k, warning: infidelity, genre: past rl, universe: non-au (j²), year: 2013, .pairing: jensen/jared with j/d & j/g

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cillab42 July 6 2013, 16:14:11 UTC
Poor Jensen, I hurt for him. So glad to read something from you, because you have such a way with words that make me feel what they feel,great job.

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jojothecr July 7 2013, 10:26:41 UTC
I feel really bad for him, if that helps? ;)

And thank you! Feels good, to have something posted, after such a long time. Granted, nothing exclusive, but still...

Thanks. :)

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cillab42 July 7 2013, 13:12:25 UTC
It's wonderful to read something new from you, I love the way you write.

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jojothecr July 7 2013, 22:08:10 UTC
Thank you much. :)

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peepingdru July 6 2013, 17:54:13 UTC
sooooo amazingly poignant ♥♥♥♥

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jojothecr July 7 2013, 10:26:53 UTC
Thank you! :)

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darklondonsky July 6 2013, 21:36:34 UTC
Just saw your post and instantly had to head over, also with you mentioning that particular short film, know it, too.

This is a perfect J2 version of it. And poetic, so tender and sensitive. Yet bitter. I suffer along with Jensen in the story.
<3

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jojothecr July 7 2013, 10:29:43 UTC
The movie got me, I have to say. Though I usually skip right to the ending. ;)

I don't know why I like suffering Jensen that much. I feel kinda bad, actually. But I'm really glad you liked it. Thank you much! :)

p.s. I wouldn't mind having a banner/divider for this... if you'd feel like doing one?

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darklondonsky July 7 2013, 20:22:58 UTC
Yeah me, too. I totally was intrigued by that film.

Hey, suffering!Jen is a classic <3 And he´s always suffering so well ;-)
Especially in this one. Re-read potential!

Hon, I´d love to do a banner for the story. I just can´t promise you quick results at the mo :-/

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jojothecr July 8 2013, 09:58:16 UTC
Thank you. :)

Hey, it's okay, if you don't have time, just, you know, if you needed some inspiration. ;)

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lady_eilthana July 7 2013, 19:20:46 UTC
This story just kept pushing all the right buttons. *-*

It's sad to see them like this, but you can still feel how they tell themselves that like this is better than not at all. Like they said, they can't let go. And this whole situation they're in hurts (for the reader, too), but it's the good kind of hurt.

I'm glad to see you post a new fic. And you did such a great job with it! ♥

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jojothecr July 8 2013, 10:02:52 UTC
Yay!

Yeah, it's a really sad situation, and I don't really know how it would work in reality, but... that's why it's titled fiction, right?

Thank you! It sure is nice to have something new, finally. :)

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lady_eilthana July 8 2013, 18:10:35 UTC
I'm sure there are situations like this in reality, no doubt about that. And I think this version that you deliver is very much believable.

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jennygeee July 7 2013, 22:37:34 UTC
Wow that was so good! You should really write more...please :))

So sad and so moving, thanks so much for sharing this.

I had to use my sad icon for this :)

xxxx

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jojothecr July 8 2013, 10:03:32 UTC
Thank you much! :)

Aw, poor baby.

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