Comments | jojo_kim: When We Were Kings (Part 1: Tired Heart, Every End Has a Start)

jojo_kim

When We Were Kings (Part 1: Tired Heart, Every End Has a Start)

Oct 20, 2016 13:38

Ship: HimUp
Rating: PG13
Length: 3.6K

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Comments 6

YOU'RE BACK anonymous October 22 2016, 14:01:54 UTC

Omg YAY I'm so excited you're posting again!!! I'm very excited for this, I love some good angsty Himup. Oh Himchan, drugs...not a good call, obviously. I LOVED Jongup standing up to him; that was perfect. Himchan using his scary voice on him...

I'm guessing him turning down the invite won't be the end of that! I wonder if someone will reach out to him and try to convince him. I love all the flashbacks interspersed with the present day; they're really effective. Can't wait for more! Welcome back, seriously. :)

-L

Re: YOU'RE BACK jojo_kim November 7 2016, 14:29:18 UTC

Thank you for reading! I promise the breakdown of the band will be fully explained by the end. Himchan's just such an unreliable narrator that it's taking him a long time to string events together. But it will come eventually! ^.^

soft_wallnuts October 22 2016, 14:16:11 UTC

What a great first chapter! I feel like this fic's already got me firmly in its grip. ^^ Himchan's a good choice for narrator since his point of view is definitely an interesting one. I found myself constantly doubting his narration a little bit, with his memories possibly being a little fuzzy and all. Also I really enjoyed the fact he didn't spill all the beans in right the first chapter regarding the details on how the group fell apart - I love the suspense! ^^ The flashbacks are such a cool counterpart to the present of the story, though. Can't wait for more!

Glad to see you posting on LJ again! Thanks for sharing your awesome writing~

jojo_kim November 7 2016, 14:27:22 UTC

Thank you so much! I really honestly never planned to post anything else since I work so much but this storyline just completely took me over and I couldn't do anything until it exploded out of me lol. I'm so glad you liked it! :)

YOU'RE BACK!!!!! jihoonlover85 November 13 2016, 07:16:30 UTC

OMGGGGG!!!!! YOU'RE BACK!!!! I MISSED YOU AND YOUR FREAKING AMAZING STORIES SO MUCH!!! but omg Himchan...Jongup...I want to cry addiction is such a scary thing man and people always feel like they will be able to control it but it never ever works out that way and Jongup is the best for standing up to Himchan and confronting him about it and oh god I can't wait to read more!! welcome back!!!

Re: YOU'RE BACK!!!!! jojo_kim November 14 2016, 12:44:51 UTC

Thank you! I really honestly had no plans to ever post here again. I work too much and I reallyyyy want to write something original but this plot would. not. go. away. I kept writing it in my head over and over and was like screw it, I'm typing it out...
It's really made me miss writing for BAP. :(