(Mouse Guard Hack) Realm Guard, Rangers of the North

[johnpaul613]

So we finally have a decent looking PDF put together with all the wonderful advise from the boards.  http://www.mediafire.com/?1nxtwk5y0hm   The file is about 4.5mb (PDF) right now.

Specific things we'd like input on:

• Natures: On p. 18 of the PDF, as well as all the creature Natures further on starting on p. 24. The rough rule is 3 descriptors per race and 4 per creature (including Orcs, etc.). Not concerned with gerunds, nouns... if you think something would work better, post here

• Traits: Additions or removals?

• Wises: Fleshing them out, though I've come up with a pretty decent list with ~90 wises

• Environment Nature: Whether or not specific 'Places of Note' (Moria, Ettenmoors, Dead Marshes, Fangorn Forest, etc.) should have a Nature themselves

• Tokens of Power: Does the concept make sense and is using a trait-like system the right way to go about it?

• Anything else you spot or can think of!

Please use the Burning Wheel forums thread http://www.burningwheel.org/forum/showthread.php?t=7491 for peer review or playtest results.  Thanks so much.