the key

[joelybean]

i wrote something... i actually wrote something... okay so it's complete fluff it's completed

Comments

[closexyourxeyes]

i like, i like.

[inpurity]

very very sweet, I like the fact that there is no dialog and everything is so rushed and impossible and raw. Very nice. I personally wouldn't use the key metaphor at the end as it has already explained at the beginning and it is a little superfluous, but it is a really nice story nevertheless.
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[joelybean]

i originally ended it without the last line but i added it at the last second... and after re-reading it i agree it is completely unnecessary.

[inpurity]

I absolutely adore your icon.
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[joelybean]

thanks. out of all of them i've made the two mest ones i've used so far on this thread and this one are my favourites.

[random_arrival]

Whoa. I love it. It does not suck at all, it's awesome. You're an amazing author, you really are.

[joelybean]

*blushes* thanks and you should recognize the story... hehehe.

[princessoflight]

I loved loved loved loved loved it! but the last line should not have been crossed out.