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ilarose4 March 24 2010, 04:56:57 UTC
Amazing!!! And now I have to go to bed. I love this.

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jockchic April 5 2010, 05:38:07 UTC
Thank you so much for the lovely comment! I know this was weeks ago, but I hope you slept well, haha.

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jockchic April 5 2010, 05:45:32 UTC
Sorry again for the incredibly late reply, and thank you, as always, for your generous comments!! I'm embarrassed about the heavy-handed pathos in this chapter, but so grateful for your kind response--you are wonderful!

There was actually more re: Kurt and orgasms that I had to chop out, because it sounded even more melodramatic than the dialogue that did make it into the chapter, but I'm trying to tweak this last part to include that information. Again, your observations are astounding, and I dearly hope this story ends up being worth the emotional turmoil for you. ♥ Thank you again, so much!

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elgatoneun March 24 2010, 05:45:54 UTC
Oh Jesus, this is gorgeous.

Kurt and Puck are just so real and flawed and beautiful. Everyone of the characters portrayed ring true.

Great job. I can't wait to read the conclusion.

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jockchic April 5 2010, 05:47:09 UTC
Thank you for your patience (I am apparently the queen of rude, late replies) and thank you for the amazing comment! I'm so happy the characters seem genuine; you are awesome for that reassurance.

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jockchic April 5 2010, 05:55:20 UTC
Haha, and here I am, weeks late and just now replying. I am so sorry for the delay, and endlessly grateful to you for leaving me such wonderful comments!

Thank you for your remarks about the sex scene! I was worried that it was too talky and awkward. (I still think it's too awkward, but I feel better on the talky front now, haha.) And thanks especially for your observations about the funeral--I have been counting on it as the sort of explanation for Kurt's later behavior and characterization, and I am thrilled that it came off as informative! Your patience throughout this slow reveal is a testament to your attentiveness. I can't tell you how much that means to me.

It's so weird that you'd thank me for writing this, because I feel entirely undeserving of your readership. You are lovely. Thanks a million for following this and commenting. ♥

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addictedtoramen March 24 2010, 07:17:35 UTC
perfection
i can't explain it any better then that

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jockchic April 5 2010, 05:56:04 UTC
Oh, man, such high praise! I will work hard to deserve it! Thank you, and sorry for the late reply.

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