Fic: Where we belong

Aug 15, 2009 18:49

Posting this over the weekend, hoping it'll go by unnoticed.

Title: Where we belong
Author: joans23
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Rating: R
Words: 1,600
Summary: They've made it this far and they've still got each other, but now what?
Notes: Written for whenthewarsover. So much thanks to the lovely blincolin for a some intensive beta work. Any remaining mistakes are because of my ( Read more... )

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englishblue August 15 2009, 17:56:18 UTC
Oh God. I love that. You gave me a smile when I've forgotten how. Thank you, darling.

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joans23 August 19 2009, 14:30:07 UTC
If I could at least make you smile, then maybe it wasn't that bad. Thank you, sweet lady!

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kee August 15 2009, 18:47:03 UTC
Parking her in the lot and handing the keys over stabs through his heart like a blunt silver stake, but where they're going, she can no longer take them.

Okay, sweetie, here's the thing. Until I read this, I would have never thought that I'd find any scenario where Dean gives up the Impala believable. (And pie too!) But it really works here. Even though it's not life or death, Dean is still sacrificing everything for Sam. That's so very Dean. -smile-

I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing! <3

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joans23 August 19 2009, 14:33:50 UTC
blincolin said I should really think about the whole selling of the Impala thing, but I clung to it in one of my stubborn moments. Dean's grand gesture (for me, at least). I have to have at least a little bit of sadness with the happy ending, you know. ;)

Thank you, my love!!

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sloane_m August 15 2009, 19:57:52 UTC
This was lovely. I really liked the undercurrent of emotion to it and the fact that Dean's doing what he does best - looking after Sam and what he needs. Wonderful story.

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joans23 August 19 2009, 14:26:29 UTC
Thank you so much! :)

Ps. Great icon!

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joans23 August 19 2009, 14:35:36 UTC
Dean would do anything for Sammy ... and that is why we love him so! Thank you for the lovely comment, adorable Laure!

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marciaelena August 15 2009, 20:37:07 UTC
This is beautiful, hon. Dean taking care of Sam, biding his time while he pulls Sam out of his shell, and then giving them both the thing they really need--peace and each other. <3

I spotted something I think you need to fix?

There's pie for breakfast and they grin at each other over the black coffee they use to wash down double helpings of Berried Treasure Pie with whipped cream. They go back to the room to fuck again before they hit the road, Dean moaning as Sam bends him over the foot of the bed, before they hit the road.

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joans23 August 16 2009, 12:48:31 UTC
You are too kind, dear one.

Thanks for catching that! My head was not screwed on properly for this one, I'm afraid. :(

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