Down to nothing

Dec 18, 2007 15:06


Feels like I haven't written anything in ages ...

Title : Down to nothing
Author : Joans23
Rating : R
Paring : Dean/Jo

Jo remembers the first time. He came to her small, dark room in the back and just stood there in the doorway. Looked at her with hungry eyes until she told him Take me, I’m yours. She expected him to fall on her then, like some half- ( Read more... )

fiction, het

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clonus7 December 18 2007, 14:31:19 UTC
This was beautiful. Thank you for sharing :)

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joans23 December 18 2007, 16:03:04 UTC
My pleasure :) Glad you liked it.

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quiet_elle December 18 2007, 14:39:21 UTC
very beautiful and yet powerful. well done.

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joans23 December 18 2007, 16:03:52 UTC
Thank you!

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joans23 December 18 2007, 16:04:54 UTC
You know I like my Dean and Jo bittersweet ;)

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fleshflutter December 18 2007, 14:44:33 UTC
Oh my goodness, that was simply perfect. Incredibly poetic and moving with such a thread of truth going all the way through it. :)

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joans23 December 18 2007, 16:06:58 UTC
Wow, thank you for the great comment! Glad you liked it :)

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folie_lex December 18 2007, 16:39:01 UTC
Man! You really need to stop killing me!

Despite that, it was beautiful!

Thanks so much for sharing :)

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joans23 December 18 2007, 16:53:47 UTC
:( But I like killing you ...
No really, thanks (as always) for the kind words!

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