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Oct 15, 2007 15:44


This is what happens when you listen to sad music while it's dark and rainy outside. Four drabbles!!

Title : Taken from the world

She's Ellen’s little girl. That’s the first thought that goes through his head as he sits there holding her. She was so brave, so strong. Now she’s tenderly slipping away from him. He’s trying not to look at the blood ( Read more... )

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quiet_rebel October 15 2007, 14:08:09 UTC
*sigh*

Each one gets more painful to read.

I could definitely tell what kind of rainy day mood you were in. My favorite was Nights of winter rain. I really like that image of the rain falling and the neon sign and just Dean sitting on that bed as Jo sleeps. Like I could hear his thoughts as he gets ready to leave when he doesn't want to go.

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joans23 October 15 2007, 14:26:11 UTC
I love rainy days, but this one just made me feel so melancholy. Missing someone I haven't even met yet as my Mom puts it. So I channeled it ... Thanks for reading and perking me up with the nice comment :)

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quiet_rebel October 15 2007, 14:47:05 UTC
Missing someone I haven't even met yet as my Mom puts it.

Great line, Mom :D

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gems1984 October 15 2007, 15:51:17 UTC
hi....hope you don't mind me saying, but those were great!! really enjoyed them...I think rainy days give you the best inspiration!

Gem
xx

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joans23 October 15 2007, 15:54:10 UTC
I don't mind at all, Gem!! I'm really glad you enjoyed them. Rainy days are awesome!

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brin_bailey October 16 2007, 02:46:39 UTC
I like rainy day anything, so I enjoyed these. :)

I think the third one may have been my favourite, though.

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joans23 October 16 2007, 05:10:17 UTC
Thanks, I like the third one too - it's a little bit more happy and not-so-hurty, so :)

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folie_lex October 16 2007, 23:12:03 UTC
Lovely! All of them. However I think, I'm a bit partial to the second one...
There is just something there with the imagery...

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joans23 October 17 2007, 05:25:44 UTC
Thanks, I got the inspiration from this line from a David Gray song "There's neon melting in the rain" and just got this image of Dean. Glad you like them :)

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