Fic: Wrong kind of paradise

[joans23]

Title : Wrong kind of paradise
Author : Joans23
Paring : Dean/Jo
Rating : R
Words : 1658
Summary : Slight AU, Dean and Jo run away together. Jo doesn’t know Dean’s a hunter.

Comments

[jacoba06]

Loved it :P

*Squishes you*

[joans23]

Thanks pookie :D

[p3karen]

Loved it, will they be more?

[joans23]

Thanks! Nah, I'm really a one-shot kinda gal, so this is it :)

[anonymous]

This is brilliant! Interesting AU: Jo not knowing about Dean being a hunter... And the way you're writing with so many
details is impressive, it's like being IN the story. The end was heartbreaking though. You even managed to make me emo lol I wouldn't hate reading more of this AU ;-)

[joans23]

Thank you, dear secret admirer, for the great feedback!

[joans23]

Oh, Jo, indeed! I didn't really think about it much beyond my ending, but I don't think Dean will be coming back for her.
Ps. I love it when you use that Dean/Jo icon! It's awesome!

[quiet_rebel]

Very nice. Hey, sometimes emo tells the best stories esp. with Dean and Jo.

I knew it wasn't going to end happily :( Sam wasn't there and he was going to show up eventually!

I loved the little details like how Dean does certain things like buying Jo the pie and giving her flowers to make up for disappearing. Somehow this time, I don't think those things will do!

[joans23]

Bleh, I'm so tired of emo I could cry! Literally :(

For Dean, Sam will always come first, no matter what he might feel for anyone else. I also like putting in the little details best! Thanks!