Fic: Tokyo Nights

Feb 03, 2010 18:23

Title: Tokyo Nights
Author: joans23Pairing: Jared/Jensen ( Read more... )

fiction, rpf

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kelleigh February 3 2010, 17:37:45 UTC
*is dead*

We're sorry, at this time Kels cannot submit a complete comment due to sheer hotness. She apologizes.

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kelleigh February 3 2010, 22:19:16 UTC
Okay! Coherent thoughts!

Even the Coca Cola billboard seems foreign and strange.

That's such a great, simple way to put the feeling. Because you could see and use the same products you do at home, but they're still different, even if it's only a vague feeling.

he recognizes the cold deadness of his eyes from the hundreds of photo shoots he's done.

Ugh, poor Jared. On one hand I think he deserves it because he chose the public life, but on the other I can't help but feel bad for how jaded he seems. Makes me desperately want to see the other sides of him.

To have the carefully put together man come undone beneath Jared's hands and be remade into what he used to be before this life. There's a fragility to Jensen's facade; a feeling that he's tethered to this life by a thread so thin, the barest hint of honest emotion would snap it. More than that, Jared thinks Jensen wants him to see, wants him to be the one to do it.EEEP! I'll be honest, hooker!fic can be scary. There's the potential for so much bad, that sometimes even the ( ... )

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joans23 February 6 2010, 16:41:16 UTC
Jeez, those are A LOT of coherent thoughts. I expected only gasps of horror, lol! Seriously, I'm amazed you found so much to like in this!! YOU'RE AMAZING!!!

That clip was soooo hot! I, uhm, may have a slight thing for these amateur vids were the guys claim to actually be straight. But in this one, still amateur, the guys were honest about their sexuality and even dated once upon a time. Somehow that just made it SO MUCH HOTTER!!! After that, I just couldn't help but be inspired!! *g*

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joans23 February 6 2010, 16:35:03 UTC
Bwahahahahahahahahahahahhahaha!!!!

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the_milky_way February 3 2010, 23:27:09 UTC
Oi, okay now I can go to bed and have very nice dreams. I might be slightly drunk but this is so very hot.

And I seriously love the ending.

I love the imagery here.

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joans23 February 6 2010, 16:50:25 UTC
Slighty drunk FTW! I approve - it helps me look better, lol!!

Thank you, bb!!

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nyoka February 4 2010, 00:55:02 UTC
I know you said you hate writing porn, but I have to say this was ridiculously hot. Nomnomnom, and damn, but hooker!Jensen is my weakness, I cannot lie.

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joans23 February 6 2010, 16:54:53 UTC
I do! It's SO. FREAKING. HARD! Hee, I seem to write a lot (too much) hooker fic, but this is my first hooker!Jensen one. Weird! Thanks for reading, my dear!

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goddess_julie February 4 2010, 01:51:23 UTC
*flails*

so good...

*gasps*

delicious

*flails again*

wonderful

*dies*

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joans23 February 6 2010, 16:56:17 UTC
*rushes to revive you*

Thank you so much, sweetheart!!

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kee February 4 2010, 02:04:58 UTC
I LOVE YOU, TOO, BB!

Yay! It's posted. So, so good, Joan. And I have no idea what you're talking about because you totally rock the porn!

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joans23 February 6 2010, 16:57:40 UTC
*cringes*

You are too kind, as always, dear heart! Thanks again!!!!

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